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friscoron wrote:
First cc is that it's OCF, not OFC. Off-Camera Flash.
Most important nit is on Images 1 and 2, the flash is below the subject's face, and away from the way they're turned their faces, so you have shadows you may not necessarily want. Even if you were going for broad lighting, you would want it closer to the way their faces are turned. Look at the first one especially, how dark her right eye is. No. 4, it's also set below their faces (looks like even below their hands as shadow is above her hand), but it can work because their faces are tilted down.
You really just have to keep practicing, and evaluating yourself, your light placement. ...Show more →
Good point. OCF is corrected..lol.
Here are a couple I took Sunday. I only used one light with a large modifier this time and tried to keep it above the subject and angled down. Not all were successful, but they are hopefully an improvement and the Mom loves them. Again, CC welcome.
ILCE-7RM4 85mm F1.4 DG DN | Art 020 lens 85mm f/4.0 1/640s 100 ISO 0.0 EV
ILCE-7RM4 85mm F1.4 DG DN | Art 020 lens 85mm f/4.0 1/500s 100 ISO 0.0 EV
ILCE-7RM4 FE 35mm F1.4 GM lens 35mm f/2.0 1/3200s 100 ISO 0.0 EV
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