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jacquesvroom
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Quick shot of a cool friend I met today...

Subject line says most of it...
Not quite sooc, but not far from it. Background and or sensor needs work!!

Lovely, cool Jessica

ILCE-7M4 Sigma 90mm F2.8 DG DN | C (Sony E) lens 90mm f/4.0 1/160s 100 ISO 0.0 EV

Oct 03, 2022 at 09:45 PM

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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Quick shot of a cool friend I met today...

The lighting and exposure are excellent. It looks like there are dirty spots on the backdrop behind her, to camera left, as well as what appears to be a dust spot on the edge near the lower right corner of the shot, which are details I might suggest removing with a spot healing brush or cloning. I'm not sure what the objects in the upper corners are, and I personally would remove those as well because I can't see how they enhance the shot. I think this would be a really excellent portrait if it weren't for these details.

Oct 04, 2022 at 05:28 AM

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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Quick shot of a cool friend I met today...

Daniel, thank you. Your comments are 110% “spot” on. The dirty background is really a dirty sensor, and the weird intrusions at the upper corners are edges of the lights. Proper folk would have cleaned up each of those items before posting, or, in the case of the sensor, before shooting! Mea maxima culpa, as the nuns taught me to say! Thank you again.

Oct 04, 2022 at 08:09 AM

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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Quick shot of a cool friend I met today...

Jacques...WELL DONE! A serious yet solemn portrait of of a lovely woman! Natural
Sometimes I don't see imperfections(not the correct term) in the entirety of the composition.
Dan

Oct 04, 2022 at 11:21 AM


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