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First time poster in this forum and as the title says one trip to the mall years ago is why I chose to become a photographer. Although it's not my full time job, it is a side hustle that I love to cover for things I like to buy. I purchased some gravity drop canvas a while back during a sale, stained some new apple boxes I bought from BH and recently set my studio back up in my garage. I picked up some Elinchrome soft boxes in the forum here and made some images last night I'm using godox 200pro's and a 1dxiii. Any question, comments or CC are appreciated. Hope you all stay healthy and my youngest daughter totally gets it. I need to work on a portfolio for her and guidance for that is appreciated too! She's 10 but looks much younger!
































Jan 24, 2021 at 11:22 AM
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These are fine images of beautiful young women! Great exposures IMHO.

But I do have 1 question..please do not take it as a negative..it is NOT intended to be. Portraits are a challenge for me...

Why are the top of their heads cut off? Anyone can reply besides the OP.

Thanks and again..great compositions!
Dan



Jan 25, 2021 at 10:43 AM
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wow very beautiful lighting


Jan 25, 2021 at 01:31 PM
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I have a very similar setup in my basement.


Jan 25, 2021 at 01:34 PM
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Danpbphoto wrote:
These are fine images of beautiful young women! Great exposures IMHO.

But I do have 1 question..please do not take it as a negative..it is NOT intended to be. Portraits are a challenge for me...

Why are the top of their heads cut off? Anyone can reply besides the OP.

Thanks and again..great compositions!
Dan


I had the same take on the heads. Nonetheless, I really like these--especially the grouping.



Jan 25, 2021 at 02:23 PM
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Danpbphoto wrote:
These are fine images of beautiful young women! Great exposures IMHO.

But I do have 1 question..please do not take it as a negative..it is NOT intended to be. Portraits are a challenge for me...

Why are the top of their heads cut off? Anyone can reply besides the OP.

Thanks and again..great compositions!
Dan


So my goal was I wanted big images on a particular wall in our home so I wanted to cut off even more to have their heads but I didn't. So the crop was intentional if that makes sense. I appreciate the kind words and the Elinchrome softboxes are really nice. I bought them on this site. Two of them for $300 shipped. I think the best thing I purchased was stands with wheels because I was able to move the strobes so easily. I am self taught and watch a lot of youtube and classes online that I think are worth it. I used to have a light meter and it got stolen but this type of photography makes me want to buy another.




Jan 25, 2021 at 02:45 PM
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yong123 wrote:
wow very beautiful lighting

Thanks Yong and got the light really close as I could and feathered it.

Thanks Dan too!



Jan 25, 2021 at 02:47 PM
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Bob Kane wrote:
I had the same take on the heads. Nonetheless, I really like these--especially the grouping.


Thanks Bob and luckily my wife was there to help as some what as an assistant. It gets stressful with the girls during these shoot and my middle daughter doesn't always cooperate best for photographs.



Jan 25, 2021 at 02:48 PM
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So my goal was I wanted big images on a particular wall in our home so I wanted to cut off even more to have their heads but I didn't. So the crop was intentional if that makes sense. I appreciate the kind words and the Elinchrome softboxes are really nice. I bought them on this site. Two of them for $300 shipped. I think the best thing I purchased was stands with wheels because I was able to move the strobes so easily. I am self taught and watch a lot of youtube and classes online that I think
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That is what I needed to know. Commentators, at times, base their comments on what "they" observe not the intention of the photographer.
Well done!
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Jan 25, 2021 at 10:39 PM
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Wonderful lighting. The youngster is a natural, a star is born...


Jan 25, 2021 at 11:06 PM
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Well-executed studio portraits of 3 lovely young ladies! Since Dan already brought up the cropping aspect, I am not going there again.

I really like the first image and the second image of your youngest daughter. The skin tone of the 3rd image is for my taste too reddish and it is more a matter of editing. I would like to see more fill-in light on the right of the 4th image. It seems to me that the light source on the left was a tad too far to cast light on the other side of her face. It was more a lighting from the side with longish shadows. As long as that's the effect you are after, then all is good. You definitely put the light source closer to your youngest daughter in #5. The light is not only softer but also to the camera position, casting less shadows and shorter shadows. That one checks a lot boxes, plus her expression is priceless.

I hope you don't mind my pointing those aspects out,
Joshua

Joshua



Jan 26, 2021 at 12:14 AM
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Fine work by a proud dad, and lovely young ladies.


Jan 26, 2021 at 02:07 PM
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-"The skin tone of the 3rd image is for my taste too reddish and it is more a matter of editing. I would like to see more fill-in light on the right of the 4th image. It seems to me that the light source on the left was a tad too far to cast light on the other side of her face...You definitely put the light source closer to your youngest daughter in #5. That one checks a lot boxes, plus her expression is priceless."
-Thanks and agree 100% about the WB! Appreciate the CC and compliments. I purchased a vflat to help better control for the backlighting moving forward. I want to improve and appreciate you guys!

-"Wonderful lighting. The youngster is a natural, a star is born..."
Thanks @brad-man! I want to really get her modeling because she is only 10 and is very talented with playing the violin, dancing and is a comedian to go along with her beauty. She has serious discipline. I just have to get her some shots at it.

"Fine work by a proud dad, and lovely young ladies."
-Thanks and my wife and I have dedicated a lot to our girls and thankfully they work really hard in school and home. I am extremely excited for what their future holds but can be patient too.




Jan 26, 2021 at 03:19 PM
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dafonz00 wrote:
Any question, comments or CC are appreciated.

Those are lovely young ladies!

Based on my years as a full time pro, I have a few things you should consider as you move forward:

Posing: Head tilt is effective, but I think in a few a little less tilt would be better.

Lighting: I see you experimented, which is good! I see you used a kicker on some, which helped with background separation. I suggest you buy a good reflector if you don't already have one. I like the Westcott 5-in-1. Get a 50" and maybe add the 30". When doing one light, high ratio dramatic lighting, a little fill would keep the mood but help prevent crushing the blacks. Also experiment with lighting patterns. For instance, look at the broad lit image or your youngest daughter. Go back and take a series including the broad lit, then do short lit, loop, butterfly and Rembrandt. Study how her appearance changes based on the lighting pattern. Some patterns work better with specific facial shapes of round, oval, heart and thin.

Your photo of the garage points out one of the major problems of home studios, especially when using large modifiers. The ceiling is just too low to get the key light high enough for many lighting patterns. By looking at the catchlights I see you could make about 10 o'clock with your key, but in some it was at 9:00 o'clock, or side lighting. If possible, you might even try putting the background in the garage door and step out into the driveway where you can get your key a lot higher. I live out in the country so I'd have not problem, but if you are in an urban neighborhood, you might not want to draw that much attention. Also, check if your city (San Jose, right?), has an artist cooperative. Often they have studio space that you can rent at a modest rate.

I wish you much success! Keep experimenting but mostly have fun!



Jan 26, 2021 at 05:30 PM
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You got some nice shots, but cutting off part of the top of the head just about ruins the shots.

Great expression on #5, on #4 I think there is too much shadow on the right side of the face.



Jan 27, 2021 at 03:40 AM
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dmacmillan wrote:
Those are lovely young ladies!

Based on my years as a full time pro, I have a few things you should consider as you move forward:

Posing: Head tilt is effective, but I think in a few a little less tilt would be better.

Lighting: I see you experimented, which is good! I see you used a kicker on some, which helped with background separation. I suggest you buy a good reflector if you don't already have one. I like the Westcott 5-in-1. Get a 50" and maybe add the 30". When doing one light, high ratio dramatic lighting, a little fill
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Thanks for all the tips and what to look out for. I love this idea and just a pain in the ass I would think to haul everything is my only problem. I will have to get better with my space.

"Go back and take a series including the broad lit, then do short lit, loop, butterfly and Rembrandt." - This is something I want to get much better at and how to replicate each look versus just guessing. I am thinking of making a notebook with comments or critiques so I know what to look for when I am shooting. Sincerely appreciate the comments!




Jan 28, 2021 at 10:28 PM
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Scott McLeod wrote:
You got some nice shots, but cutting off part of the top of the head just about ruins the shots.

Great expression on #5, on #4 I think there is too much shadow on the right side of the face.


Yeah, I understand and worked on some images last night with her where I didn't crop her head. What is usually best ratio from key light to my fill light you recommend for something like these here @scott?




Jan 28, 2021 at 10:29 PM
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dafonz00 wrote:
Yeah, I understand and worked on some images last night with her where I didn't crop her head. What is usually best ratio from key light to my fill light you recommend for something like these here @scott@?



I would like to see those new ones.

Everybody has different preferences. Maybe start at 1 stop under and then try 2, then 3. See what you like, and also I think you will find using different ratios for different things can give different moods.

And/or you could just change the distance of the fill light to the subject.

When you start playing with multiple lights, there are just so many possibilities.







Jan 31, 2021 at 02:36 AM
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Great photos!


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