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The last of the Fall color for 2020 along the Ramapo River in Northern NJ, early light and fog.
All comments welcome and thanks for viewing.
Dean

https://photos.smugmug.com/Fall-2020/i-jKscSfG/0/f4374096/X3/_28A0013-16-Edit-X3.jpg



Nov 10, 2020 at 01:22 PM
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well presented foggy atmosphere


Nov 10, 2020 at 02:12 PM
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Excellent work, Dean.


Nov 10, 2020 at 06:41 PM
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Hauntingly beautiful.

Birdie



Nov 10, 2020 at 07:35 PM
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Beautiful image! Well done!

One subjective suggestion, if I may. I understand your desire to include the full reflection of the tree, but I think in doing so, your image becomes unbalanced visually (even though your horizon is in the center). The most beautiful part of the image is the light, delicate tree in the fog in the upper part of the frame. In contrast, the reflection is relatively dark and contrasty - especially in the extreme lower right corner. My eye keeps going there. Perhaps if you cropped the lower part of the image to where the horizon line (where the tree trunk meets the grass) falls about a third of the way up from the new crop line, you still get the idea of the reflection, but now your eye goes right to that beautiful fog shrouded tree with the delicate leaves. Just a thought.

Take care!

-Bill



Nov 10, 2020 at 11:02 PM
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Great mood in the photo here. I agree with Bill on the eye going to the lower right. For me it was the blue which appeared at the bottom that was taking the attention away. Probably you can see if toning down the blue from there may help, if you don't want to crop out that part.

- Gautam



Nov 11, 2020 at 12:15 AM
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Beautiful image. I think the comments made above regarding the reflection have merit.


Nov 11, 2020 at 03:38 AM
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Thanks, everybody for your comments it's greatly appreciated.

Bill, Gautam
Thank you for your detailed comments and observations. Your point is well taken about where the eye is going. I looked at both suggestions and find the crop might be a better solution. I have included the cropped version here for comparison it's a work in progress and I will continue to look at the options. Thanks again regards,
Dean

https://photos.smugmug.com/Fall-2020/i-Fg93wh9/0/f1af0e45/X3/_28A0013-16-Edit-2-X3.jpg



Nov 11, 2020 at 10:31 AM
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Initial reaction to your image: "Fine Art"
Voted.



Nov 11, 2020 at 09:53 PM





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