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SeanHew
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Hi Everyone,

As the title states, I think I'll be printing these two photos (fairly large) for my wall. I'm 90% sure I'll be printing the one from Tunnel View and >50% that I'll print the one from Yosemite Falls.

I would really appreciate any and all critiques before doing so! Thanks!







Tunnel View







Yosemite Falls




Jan 26, 2020 at 10:33 PM
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I really like the first image. In the second image, not being able to see the source of the mist makes it feel like a little bit of a distraction. That is just a personal opinion without having a connection with being there during the shot. How large do you mean by pretty large? I found that if I do a 13x19 print first, that will help me find a lot of mistakes that I'm not seeing on my laptop. I've also made it a habit of going over the sky with a fine toothed comb. I hate finding dust spots in a print later. My experience is limited to making some 24x36 prints and stuff that is unnoticeable on an 8x10 is pretty glaring at that size.

Daniel



Jan 26, 2020 at 11:16 PM
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Depending on how, and how well, you plan on lighting your prints, my guess would be that the top one might come out a bit too dark for pleasant viewing versus how you see it on your screen. The landscape is quite dim relative to the quite intense sky and prints often come out much darker than you might expect from viewing on screen, particularly if you are using an uncalibrated monitor with cranked up brightness to do your editing.

I would suggest, if possible, soft proofing it with an appropriate printer/paper profile for what your desired output is, and possibly even doing a small hard proof to check you are happy with it. I suspect you will find that brightening the shadowy landscape area of the image would be advantageous.

The bottom image feels a bit underexposed to me, even for screen viewing I would be adding around 0.3-0.5EVs to that image (I am viewing on a calibrated screen at 105cd/m2) and for print you might want to brighten it a little bit more as images never translate to paper as bright as you see them on screen (which is why soft and hard proofing is so important for best results.)

I do however argee with the above poster that the relatively thin strip of mist in image two is a bit distracting. Image one is a stellar shot, but for me would require some tweaking to make it translate well to a print displayed in an average home with average lighting.

I will disclaimer this by saying that dim prints are my pet peeve given I don't have gallery lighting in my home and I will often do two hard proofs to ensure everything is perfect before completing the final print job, as my first hard proof inevitably comes back with some imperfection I need to fix. Even your choice of paper can have a massive impact on how an image translates from screen to ink.



Jan 27, 2020 at 05:44 AM
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How are your prints coming along?

Daniel



Jan 30, 2020 at 09:42 PM
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I like the second one the best. I agree with the crop comment though. Maybe add a bit more of the fog at the bottom?


Jan 30, 2020 at 09:57 PM
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Daniel-S wrote:
How are your prints coming along?

Daniel

I haven't printed them yet. Been traveling for work this whole week. Was going to try this weekend but have a lot of work this weekend as well.

As suggested, I'm going to do some smaller trial prints and adjust shadows and exposure as needed. I think I'll end up printing this on metal.

As for the other image, I'm not sure if I'm going to print it. I may try re editing it and re cropping it. The original image you could see the valley floor with snow but it was just so messy (with just a light amount of snow) that I thought it looked better cropping it out but now I'm second guessing myself.



Jan 30, 2020 at 11:05 PM
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SeanHew wrote:
I haven't printed them yet. Been traveling for work this whole week. Was going to try this weekend but have a lot of work this weekend as well.

As suggested, I'm going to do some smaller trial prints and adjust shadows and exposure as needed. I think I'll end up printing this on metal.

As for the other image, I'm not sure if I'm going to print it. I may try re editing it and re cropping it. The original image you could see the valley floor with snow but it was just so messy (with just a light amount of
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The 2nd one looks incomplete...like the image was loading and then it got cut off...the valley floor may be messy, but having just a sliver of it would make a huge difference. on my monitor the 1st one looks dark.



Jan 30, 2020 at 11:13 PM
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This website has a great place to discuss images and how to improve them: the Photo Critique forum. On that forum members often post not only comments and suggestions but examples of changes in the post processing and adjustments that might improve the image.

I recommend you take a look at that forum. Sadly, it seems only a handful of landscape photographers participate on that forum. In fact overall participation is fairly low. I have participated off and on for years and the reason for lack of participation is clear. The vast majority of photographers who post on these forums are looking for positive feedback. No matter how tactful and respectful the critiques are, they do not want to hear any negatives. If you are interested in the Critique Forum, the limited participation can actually work in your favor providing more attention to your work.

Since this is a presentation forum, I will only make a short comment on the images. The first is a great iconic shot of Yosemite. It would make a great and spectacular large print. It could really benefit from some simple improvement in PP, including brightening the mountains and also using selective dodge and burn.



Jan 31, 2020 at 09:01 AM
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I agree wth some of the comments. These look dark. I'd check the histogram to make sure they are properly exposed/adjusted. Then, print a small version and make sure it's what you like. Prints are darker than monitors. If you use metallic paper, they are brighter but other surfaces tend to look darker than the screen.


Jan 31, 2020 at 01:33 PM





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