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I really like where you're going with this. Beautiful location, and I believe I see some good posing as well.
Problem is, there's a distinct lack of shadow that results in substantial visual confusion here. My eye has absolutely no idea where you, as the artist, want it to go. Also I'm all for expansive landscape imagery, but your couple is completely, and I mean completely lost in the composition. In 1, 2, and 3 I can hardly make out their likeness.
I think of all the images in the set, 5 has the most potential. I can see the couple, the raised foot, the kiss, it's cute. The reflection is a nice touch, and the stones to the right push my eye toward the highlights/blue sky in the left where the couple is conveniently and I imagine intentionally placed. Again though, the elements of the landscape are competing for attention here and I feel the whole left side of the frame is wasted space. A square crop maybe?
Keep it up! Again, I really do like where you are going with this.

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