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May 20, 2018 at 10:50 PM
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Looks like it was shot natural light with a window maybe? Shallow DOF, f/1.4 or so. Did you shoot raw? I would play with the white balance and possibly look for a bounce card to soften shadows for the headshot.


May 24, 2018 at 12:49 AM
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I would recommend that you diagnose this photo yourself. Look critically at what works for you and what doesn't. Here's what I would look at: do you like the color? Does it look accurate and natural? Do you like the location and depth of the shadows? (These are the topics referenced immediately above.) How would you change/affect these things? Do you like the depth of field in this shot (what's in focus vs. out of focus areas)? Do you like the expression? (I do.)

My point is this: to improve your (our) photography, it's really important to be able to critically evaluate our own work, to look closely at what we've done in the image-creation process, and to see what choices we can make, whether technique or equipment, to make the images we want to make. Asking for comments is certainly helpful, but critical self-evaluation is the truest path to learning and growing as a photographer. So, for example, if you were to say, "I really think this is photo is too warm," or "the shadows around his mouth are too dark; how can I improve there?" you would then know what you need and others can be more helpful as well.

I hope this is helpful to you; it's offered sincerely.



May 24, 2018 at 01:42 PM
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Steve Wylie wrote:
I would recommend that you diagnose this photo yourself. Look critically at what works for you and what doesn't. Here's what I would look at: do you like the color? Does it look accurate and natural? Do you like the location and depth of the shadows? (These are the topics referenced immediately above.) How would you change/affect these things? Do you like the depth of field in this shot (what's in focus vs. out of focus areas)? Do you like the expression? (I do.)

My point is this: to improve your (our) photography, it's really important to be able
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Thank you very much for the genuine response.

You are the first one to tell me that I should critic my own photo. I haven't really thought about it. Thanks for reminding me.

Actually, I do have a question though, since the photo was shot indoor at night with just regular lighting, some shadows are pretty dark, but some highlights are really bright, if I reveal more shadows, then the highlights will be too bright. I don't really what to do in this scenario.

And I do agree with you. Now I see it's too warm, is this a WB thing?





May 29, 2018 at 10:51 PM
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When you FIRST look at an image, something will jump out at you. Here, it's YELLOW. This image feels too yellow which is not quite the same as just being warm. If you want it this warm, then it feels like it needs some red added to it to make it warmer and not so yellow. If you want it more neutral, there are other ways to address that, but going back to the raw file if there is one, is the preferred method. If not, this is certainly correctable with Curves and Hue/Saturation. It also would likely benefit from using the Highlight/Shadow filter, again, preferably on the raw file. That would even out some of the blown out teeth and open up some of the shadows. How far you can go with that will depend on the file. After that, you can address local areas as needed with whatever tools you are most comfortable with. The above advice is very good. YOU have to be your own worst critic, and while it's great to have the input of others, the better you get at analyzing your own images, the better you will become. The good thing is that you've got a nice image to work on with a direct connection with your subject and a wonderful smile. If you just stopped here, you'd have an image that is better than many out there.


May 30, 2018 at 02:07 AM
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Peter has given you some ways to improve this specific photo. I’d like the takeaway to be that you use this experience to improve your photography before snapping the shutter. Why is the photo yellow? (The light source is tungsten and the solution is a white balance change in camera, either by selecting the tungsten white balance or by using a neutral gray card to create a custom white balance.) Why are the shadows so deep? (Because the location of the source of the light in relation to your subject will predict exactly where the shadows will land and how deep they will be. Move your subject and the shadows willl be different.). In short, evaluate your scene before hitting the shutter, address the predictable outcomes, and make changes accordingly. Assesssing the direction and quality of light is one of the first principles of photography.


Jun 02, 2018 at 11:15 AM
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Lock the thread. Spend the next few months studying and reflecting on Steve and Peter's generous responses. You'll learn more from their two or three comments than you might from dozens of FM threads.

FMer wisdom is everywhere, but generally scattered and difficult to discern.

They've condensed it for you.



Jun 02, 2018 at 02:04 PM
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Thanks, Chuck.


Jun 03, 2018 at 12:36 AM





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