DerrickPAC
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This will probably mimic what Ron and others have said, but just wanted to give you my 2 cents. Having a full-time job that isn’t in photography I tend to browse a lot, but don’t always commit to replying to people’s posts.
I also don’t have a lot of confidence in my work at times and will hold back on critiquing others in any way, feeling I may not have the best foundation to give any insight myself.
That being said, she is a absolutely stunning and I love the setting with the flowers and the exposure itself looks spot on. The abundance of the flowers overwhelms the image and makes her disappear to a point. If she was brought a few feet closer to reveal more of the lower half of her body (even if she still occupied about the same percentage of the frame), it would probably make her much more of a focal point. There is a flower branch by her left shoulder that also competes with her face. She has beautiful eyes, but I feel like I’m seeing too much of the whites on the left side...which I know can be difficult myself even if I turn their head or attempt to change my angle from my perspective.
Just a few things that I noticed, but I’m still green with shooting portraits and have a lot to work on myself.
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