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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · location photoshoot [+bts]


Hi there

Recently we did a new photoshoot on location.



There is also a youtubemovie available.
https://youtu.be/L8g-qZdS3tQ

grtz,
Mark



Apr 30, 2018 at 03:02 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · location photoshoot [+bts]


Really dig the concept, but something about the tilt is a bit awkward. I think because she is almost vertical and the church is at a much more significant tilt, perhaps.

Love the mood and lighting.

greg



Apr 30, 2018 at 04:10 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · location photoshoot [+bts]


gheller wrote:
Really dig the concept, but something about the tilt is a bit awkward. I think because she is almost vertical and the church is at a much more significant tilt, perhaps.

Love the mood and lighting.

greg


100% agree. that's what caught my eye first, too.




Apr 30, 2018 at 07:57 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · location photoshoot [+bts]


Other than tilted, bad azz shot.


May 01, 2018 at 07:57 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · location photoshoot [+bts]


Love everything but the tilt.


May 01, 2018 at 02:21 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · location photoshoot [+bts]


The tilt doesn't bother me at all. Nice image! Perhaps the best view though was the smile on the model's face while viewing the images in the camera. Beautiful and genuine.


May 15, 2018 at 10:34 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · location photoshoot [+bts]


fuzzy concept poorly executed, horrible lighting. Sorry, don't mean to offend.


May 20, 2018 at 09:41 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · location photoshoot [+bts]


And thanks for making the narrative in English

Kelly



May 20, 2018 at 11:45 PM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · location photoshoot [+bts]


Great work, love the bts.


May 21, 2018 at 04:40 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · location photoshoot [+bts]


gbunton wrote:
fuzzy concept poorly executed, horrible lighting. Sorry, don't mean to offend.


why do you feel it is poorly executed and has horrible lighting? I feel you should provide some more context to your statement. Of course we all have our own opinion but I look at it and have hard time agreeing with your statement. I am curious to know your position.



May 24, 2018 at 12:44 AM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · location photoshoot [+bts]


I really like it, except for the tilt.

To me, it appears that the tilt was an accident instead of intentional. I am not sure how to suggest an improvement, but that's what passed through my mind. I apologize



May 24, 2018 at 01:17 PM
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You may think my response is just a grumpy old man statement but it's quite the contrary. I think in the avatar section it should be recommended that instead of posting what gear you own, perhaps it should state what your experience level is, and that way when you respond to post viewers will have an understanding of where you are coming from. Ask yourself what is this photo trying to portray? Is it a beautiful woman in a graveyard? Maybe someone attending a church event. I believe the background structure is a mausoleum or crypt found in graveyards. If that's the case it would indicate maybe she's in mourning. Clearly, that's not the case as it looks like a fashion shoot. Confusion? The pose is a distracting. Never have a woman standing out in the open with a hand in her hair at an awkward angle and the right arm not quite sure what it's doing. Never pose someone, the time to hit your shutter is when there is a gesture. the lighting I don't want to go on it would take another paragraph. I would just say this I've been doing photography for over 40 years, took the Ansel Adams workshops in 1970 with him, assisted Richard Avedon and Helmut Newton in my early career and opened a commercial studio that over the course of 30 yrs booked 2+ million in revenue. Anyone interested I could teach a workshop on storyboarding a project. I don't wish to say their effort wasn't well intended, but as Ansel once told me there is nothing worse than a sharp photograph with a fuzzy concept.


May 24, 2018 at 07:04 PM
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p.1 #13 · p.1 #13 · location photoshoot [+bts]




gbunton wrote:
You may think my response is just a grumpy old man statement

Although Ansel probably didn't say it, some wise person once said "better to be thought grumpy old man than write paragraph to prove it."



May 25, 2018 at 11:25 PM
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p.1 #14 · p.1 #14 · location photoshoot [+bts]


Love the back lighting and great idea..


May 26, 2018 at 07:50 AM
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p.1 #15 · p.1 #15 · location photoshoot [+bts]


gbunton wrote:
You may think my response is just a grumpy old man statement but it's quite the contrary. I think in the avatar section it should be recommended that instead of posting what gear you own, perhaps it should state what your experience level is, and that way when you respond to post viewers will have an understanding of where you are coming from. Ask yourself what is this photo trying to portray? Is it a beautiful woman in a graveyard? Maybe someone attending a church event. I believe the background structure is a mausoleum or crypt found in graveyards.
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Fair enough. You raise some valid points/questions.

Having said that, sometimes "art" doesn't have to have a solid concept. I'm not necessarily saying that's applicable here, but there are times where people can produce a "pretty" image or visually pleasing art, without needing a solid and well thought through concept. Sometimes a state of suspended-disbelieve is necessary when viewing art.



May 27, 2018 at 08:34 PM
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p.1 #16 · p.1 #16 · location photoshoot [+bts]


The aerial perspective shown in you BTS video adds nicely. Thank you.

John Caldwell



May 28, 2018 at 06:00 PM





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