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More images in my latest blog post.







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Mar 28, 2018 at 01:59 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Zabriskie Defocussed


My eyes hurt.


Mar 28, 2018 at 06:35 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Zabriskie Defocussed


jforkner wrote:
My eyes hurt.


Thank you for your feedback. I’m sorry I have caused your eyes distress. Hopefully you have a bottle of Systane drops at hand for quick relief. :-)



Mar 28, 2018 at 06:57 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Zabriskie Defocussed


I don't know why did you use this zoom effect in PS for? These shots would look much better without it. Just my 2 cents....


Mar 28, 2018 at 07:45 PM
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Gregg B. wrote:
I don't know why did you use this zoom effect in PS for? These shots would look much better without it. Just my 2 cents....


Photoshop was not used for any zoom effect. It was done in the field, in camera with the lens zoom.



Mar 28, 2018 at 08:06 PM
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Although I don't care for the zoom effect in these compositions, I do appreciate your efforts. Thanks for sharing.


Mar 28, 2018 at 09:58 PM
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wlpelzmann wrote:
Although I don't care for the zoom effect in these compositions, I do appreciate your efforts. Thanks for sharing.


Thank you, Bill, for your critique.



Mar 28, 2018 at 10:00 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Zabriskie Defocussed


It's a creative way to present an often photographed location.
As with many creative shots a lot of tries don't work well and yet once in a while you get one that works.
I think the second image is one you should be pleased about, it is rather pleasing to look at.



Mar 28, 2018 at 10:55 PM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Zabriskie Defocussed


^^ Agree about the second one. Cool idea.


Mar 29, 2018 at 12:08 AM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Zabriskie Defocussed


Nice abstracts. I prefer the first. It doesn't have telltale center point that distracts from the abstract effect.


Mar 29, 2018 at 12:37 AM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Zabriskie Defocussed


Keep experimenting. I'd like to see more saturation, or contrast, or ?



Mar 29, 2018 at 01:53 AM
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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · Zabriskie Defocussed


wlpelzmann wrote:
Although I don't care for the zoom effect in these compositions, I do appreciate your efforts. Thanks for sharing.


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gpelpel wrote:
It's a creative way to present an often photographed location.
As with many creative shots a lot of tries don't work well and yet once in a while you get one that works.
I think the second image is one you should be pleased about, it is rather pleasing to look at.


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Fred Amico wrote:
^^ Agree about the second one. Cool idea.


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StephenS_CP wrote:
Nice abstracts. I prefer the first. It doesn't have telltale center point that distracts from the abstract effect.


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Keith B. wrote:
Keep experimenting. I'd like to see more saturation, or contrast, or ?



Thank you, gentlemen.

This was a playful spur-of-the-moment experiment and my hope was that I would get at least one worthwhile image. I was also going for a muted palette and therefore did not make the processing contrasty. I understand, of course, that some (or many) will not like this manner of images.








Mar 29, 2018 at 12:10 PM
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p.1 #13 · p.1 #13 · Zabriskie Defocussed


I agree about your creativity Rajan! Great work.....Another perspective to a familiar place.
Dan



Apr 02, 2018 at 08:56 AM
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I'm glad you achieved the muted palette you desired, but I agree that it could use some more "punch". I think your processing is spot on, however, and I wouldn't add more contrast in post. Perhaps a different time of day with more shadows or variations in color/texture. I think the muted palette might work well for these without the zoom effect, but the zoom effect also reduces contrast and sharpness. Together, it's harder to get a sense of the scene.

That being said, I like the second one. The zoom effect is not really my cup of tea, but it does seem to work for that image. It might be because the zoom streaks align nicely with lines in the rocks in that particular image. The zoom streaks alternately run parallel and normal to the natural lines in a very pleasing way, and complement them very well.



Apr 02, 2018 at 09:49 AM
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p.1 #15 · p.1 #15 · Zabriskie Defocussed


Danpbphoto wrote:
I agree about your creativity Rajan! Great work.....Another perspective to a familiar place.
Dan


Thank you, Dan.

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amacal1 wrote:
I'm glad you achieved the muted palette you desired, but I agree that it could use some more "punch". I think your processing is spot on, however, and I wouldn't add more contrast in post. Perhaps a different time of day with more shadows or variations in color/texture. I think the muted palette might work well for these without the zoom effect, but the zoom effect also reduces contrast and sharpness. Together, it's harder to get a sense of the scene.

That being said, I like the second one. The zoom effect is not really my cup of tea, but it
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Andrew,

Thank you for your considered remarks. In this exercise it is very difficult to know a priori how the final output is going to turn out, although after playing with it for a while you can hit the 'zone' of acceptability more often. I was lucky to come away with a couple of worthwhile frames.

As for shooting during a different time of day - it won't work in bright(er) lighting conditions unless you have a ND filter on since you need around 1 sec (or more) of shutter speed. And besides, the harsh light, shadows, and contrast wouldn't make it appealing (at least to my eyes).







Apr 02, 2018 at 11:21 AM





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