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S.n.a.p.s wrote:
Hi there Everyone..
I posted this in the people forum, but maybe its better here for some C&C?
Its been 4 years away from the camera..
I now have a new camera, studio space and new software to master. I'm feeling quite like a fish out of water.
I just finished my first shoot with a aspiring model, who just won the local grand masters in Bikini fitness.
Marie really wanted to show off her hard abs after all her hard work & diet.
I have only retouched 1 shot so far and was hoping for a little C&C before I post elsewhere and get started on the rest of her images. I tend to light and retouch my images in somewhat of a beauty photography style.
I chose this image to retouch because there was a lot of hair of the left side of her face to clean up and I wanted a challenge as I'm really out of practice.
Anyway.. thanks for looking and let me know what u think plz..
http://duann.ca/wp-content/uploads/2017/11/20171126-21.10.44-Edit-2-1.jpg...Show more →
Beautiful lady, and nice portrait. A couple of nits to consider. I would have straightened out the rumples in her outfit as best as possilbe, and also uncurled and evened the waistband on her brief. Also, the photo on my monitor has an orange cast. Was that a creative decision? Otherwise this will be a nice addition to your portfolio.
Steve
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