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Welcome edeag3 to Photocritique. A few suggestions to begin. First, the way you've sized your photos to display here, they're a little too large, at least on my monitor, to see the full photos without having to scroll. I normally size my photos 1000 px on the longer side.
Second, my advice is to only post one or two photos at a time unless there is an important relationship between the photos that enhances our understanding of your goals. I think you'll get better feedback that way.
From the series, the photo I liked best was the last one. When doing street photography, I always ask myself what attracted me to photograph a particular scene, and how best to compose and translate my thoughts and feelings to the viewer. What spoke to me in your photo were the line of the two dogs and the two children, surrounded by the throng of adults, the gentleman on the right waiting patiently with his hands clasped behind his back, some of the adults leaning forward in anticipation. Food must be pretty good there to attract such a large crowd.
Hope you don't mind that I've cropped your photo to illustrate my interpretation..
Steve
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