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lifthard2001
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · First Senior

I was asked by a friend if I would do some senior shots of her daughter for her year book page. In the past I have photographed this young lady only in studio. C&C always welcome

ABBY_-20 by lifthard1, on Flickr

ABBY_-17 by lifthard1, on Flickr

ABBY_-5 by lifthard1, on Flickr

ABBY_ by lifthard1, on Flickr

Oct 09, 2017 at 02:30 PM

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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · First Senior

That last shot is great. Awesome idea.

Oct 09, 2017 at 02:57 PM

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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · First Senior

Mark, the first looks out of focus to me, the second has a bit of hotspot on her cheeks, 3 is overexposed to my eye, 4 is best here, but the crop at the bottom is just a little too tight as you have left two fingers out on her right hand.
Douglas

Oct 09, 2017 at 06:25 PM

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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · First Senior

I think you did a really nice job here!

Oct 09, 2017 at 06:42 PM

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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · First Senior

Nice work with a few nits.
#1 has a crop going through the shoe.
#2 The crop goes through the necklace pendant.
#3 Her skin colour is markedly different in this shot.
So watch how you crop or compose the shots.

Oct 09, 2017 at 07:00 PM

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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · First Senior

All the above suggestions are valid Mark but overall the compositions look very complimentary to the subject and title.
Dan

Oct 15, 2017 at 08:00 AM

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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · First Senior

I like #1 the best but it's slightly soft and the crop through the shoe isn't great. WB appears off in #3. They're all good photos, I'm sure she'll be happy.

Oct 15, 2017 at 09:11 AM

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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · First Senior

I've found that seniors I shoot don't like face shots (2 and 3) in their portfolio.

Oct 15, 2017 at 05:45 PM


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