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The Day's Last Light Reddens the Sea
When Night is settling Upon the La Jolla Beach
Gathering the Last Shimmering Glimmers!!

May 11, 2017 at 06:39 AM

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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Gathering the Last Shimmering Glimmers!

I like the concept here but I feel the bottom third of the image is just a featureless black blob. Crop the bottom off and I feel the image will be stronger.

May 11, 2017 at 11:06 AM

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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Gathering the Last Shimmering Glimmers!

chez wrote:
I like the concept here but I feel the bottom third of the image is just a featureless black blob. Crop the bottom off and I feel the image will be stronger.

Thanks for the suggestion. How about this??

May 11, 2017 at 11:16 AM

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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Gathering the Last Shimmering Glimmers!

I'd still crop it more. Right to the very top of that black blob at the bottom of the image. That blob just does nothing for me.

May 11, 2017 at 01:33 PM

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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Gathering the Last Shimmering Glimmers!

I agree with chez, but would go just a little further. You have those strong, dark, ridges curving towards the shimmering part. Why not crop to those, making a stronger overall composition?

May 11, 2017 at 08:29 PM

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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Gathering the Last Shimmering Glimmers!

chez wrote:
I'd still crop it more. Right to the very top of that black blob at the bottom of the image. That blob just does nothing for me.

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jdc562 wrote:
I agree with chez, but would go just a little further. You have those strong, dark, ridges curving towards the shimmering part. Why not crop to those, making a stronger overall composition?

Thanks chez & jdc562 for your feedback.
I will consider various ways to crop the image to see which ones are reasonable.
Kee

May 12, 2017 at 04:30 PM


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