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ronlane
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · BW - headshot

Taken at a lighting workshop recently. I thought that it turned out well.

May 01, 2017 at 02:05 PM

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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · BW - headshot

Hi,

Well lit but I find the background a bit busy and distracting. I think a hair light (or stronger one if one was used) would help separate your model from the background better.

Overall, I like it.

May 01, 2017 at 04:41 PM

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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · BW - headshot

Pretty shot, nice expression, and the light looks good. The background doesn't bother me, FWIW.

May 01, 2017 at 11:20 PM

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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · BW - headshot

Thank you both for your input.

May 02, 2017 at 09:33 AM

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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · BW - headshot

Was looking on my phone before. Previous comments stand, but if it were my shot I'd probably push the highlights and shadows out more (both with curves adjustments and with dodge and burn) for a more contrasty look. Entirely a personal choice, nothing wrong with this portrait as-is.

May 02, 2017 at 01:37 PM

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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · BW - headshot

Thanks ChiShutter, appreciate the secondary comment after looking on the computer.

May 02, 2017 at 01:44 PM

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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · BW - headshot

I like the shot, but to be honest, the background pulls my eyes away from the subject.

May 02, 2017 at 02:32 PM


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