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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Enveloped by trees


Strolling around in the Japanese garden in SF, find this quiet spot enveloped by beautiful trees.

https://farm2.staticflickr.com/1686/26641805656_46fbd8e328_b.jpg
Apr 26, 2016 at 09:33 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Enveloped by trees


It could be intentional here, but the lean of almost everything to the right (even the pathway blocks!) seems a bit odd to my eye.
Douglas
Apr 27, 2016 at 06:59 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Enveloped by trees


I really like the image and the composition but I agree with Douglas about the lean.
Apr 27, 2016 at 07:24 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Enveloped by trees


Tilted.

There's an OOF cluster of leaves to her left. Notice that it is larger and brighter than she is. On first read, the viewer's eye is drawn to the blob, not your subject.
Apr 27, 2016 at 07:52 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Enveloped by trees


dmacmillan wrote:
Tilted.

There's an OOF cluster of leaves to her left. Notice that it is larger and brighter than she is. On first read, the viewer's eye is drawn to the blob, not your subject.

Agree.


Apr 27, 2016 at 01:20 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Enveloped by trees


dmacmillan wrote:
Tilted.

There's an OOF cluster of leaves to her left. Notice that it is larger and brighter than she is. On first read, the viewer's eye is drawn to the blob, not your subject.

Thank you , very true. She is my daughter, so my eyes naturally drifted toward her. But you are right.
Apr 29, 2016 at 02:12 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Enveloped by trees


douter wrote:
It could be intentional here, but the lean of almost everything to the right (even the pathway blocks!) seems a bit odd to my eye.
Douglas

It was intentional, i just used her frame tilting toward right as a reference.


Apr 29, 2016 at 02:12 AM





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