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bbourizk wrote:
Its a lovely image, a couple of little things that are a little off in it.
The tree coming out of head. maybe a step to the right might have helped you just avoid that but then she wouldn't have been centred in the frame.
Also the OOF green bit in the front of her, first thing my eye went to and keeps going there.
Regards
Bud
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Andre Labonte wrote:
Well done ... but I don't care for the large green diffuse blob in the lower front of the frame.
As for the tree out of head, since they are not perfectly aligned, it does not bother me at all, it is clear they are two different things.
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friscoron wrote:
This is really nice!
I do agree with the foreground blur. Sometimes it works, sometimes not so much and I'm with Bud and Andre on this one.
As for the tree, it's not so much that it's coming out of her head. She's in focus, it's out of focus, so that's not what gets me. I just think the dark tree trunk along the side of her competes for attention, even if it's out of focus. I get how you were centering her between the bushes.
But despite those minor nits, this is a really nice shot and I'm sure she's really happy with it. Great job!...Show more →
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Pguts wrote:
Great shot!
I also have to agree with the green to be a bit distracting, it seems to have an airbrushed feeling to it.
Other then that small nitpick the image is fantastic. I'd actually like to see how it would look in Black and white.
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AFphotography wrote:
Great image! I agree with the green in the foreground. My eye keeps wanting to look at it.
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FotoHouse wrote:
This. Looks good.
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rw11 wrote:
reposition her so the branch & trunk of the tree frame her
maybe take a weed whacker to the green blob
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Jim Rickards wrote:
Nice shot. My suggestion is to crop to portrait, losing the two almost-in-focus bushes in the process. That'll make her larger in the frame.
For me the tree was only a minor thing.
Thanks everyone. I was so worried about other things that I didn't realize the tree was framed like this 
Oh well, this is how I learn! Appreciate your comments and suggestions 
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