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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · -- Vanessa overlooking North West Orange County --

5D Classic
85 1.8 at f/5.6
ISO: 400
shutter: 1/13

geled YN560 IV camera left
geled YN560 IV camera right
geled YN560 IV camera right (highlighting lower body)

Here is straight off of camera...

I'm trying not to over process, but i fear i overdid the sky.

Apr 02, 2016 at 01:35 AM

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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · -- Vanessa overlooking North West Orange County --

The sky is fine but the sand is still way too bright, pulling your eye away from your beautiful model. Also, did you shoot around the location, like trying moving the camera up or down. Dropping the camera a bit would have broken her out more against the sky, but that's a subjective decision.

Apr 02, 2016 at 06:04 AM

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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · -- Vanessa overlooking North West Orange County --

Yeah...I have a lot more pics. I'll post some more later today after I process.

I understand what you mean about the rock being too bright. I tried to reduce the brightness from sooc, and I totally agree about the line of cloud cutting through her head.

Apr 02, 2016 at 08:37 AM

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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · -- Vanessa overlooking North West Orange County --

Apr 02, 2016 at 09:58 AM

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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · -- Vanessa overlooking North West Orange County --

#3 in the second set is my fave. I like the closer shot. The others were too much environment and not enough portrait for my taste. The open pose and display of the dress in #3 are very nice.

Apr 02, 2016 at 10:25 AM

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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · -- Vanessa overlooking North West Orange County --

3 is the favorite. If the lady is the subject she should be the point of the shot, not the
background, which, IMO, is too large in the photos.

If the background in four, was as bright in three, that would have been the homerun.

Remember, just my opinion.

Ed

Apr 02, 2016 at 10:29 AM

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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · -- Vanessa overlooking North West Orange County --

I agree about the background being large but it's a nice scene

Apr 02, 2016 at 12:22 PM


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