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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Tea Garden

A fun morning with Marina at the Japanese Tea Garden

Mar 30, 2016 at 04:15 AM

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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Tea Garden

Super images!

Really cool setting with a very photogenic model. Love the asian-style dress she is wearing in the first images (not a fan of the feather though).

Wish the eyes were a bit sharper in images 1 and 4.

Image 1 is very nice, but I think the DOF may be a bit too shallow. I like the aperture you're using in images 3 and 4.

Image 5 is lovely, but I wish you would have placed your model in the shade so you wouldn't be getting the harsh highlights on her shoulder and the top of her head.

Looks like it was a fun shoot.

Thanks for sharing your images.

Mar 30, 2016 at 09:56 AM

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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Tea Garden

Beautiful model well photographed. My quibble with one and two is the brightness and intensity of the bokeh. She is highly vibrant and could use some areas of rest in the remainder of the photograph. Which you accomplish in #3 and #4. There are some nice quieter elements to the composition letting her stand out. The back lighting is a touch harsh on her arms but leaves her dress and face entirely in the shade. The dress looks great. I do think a simpler background would be more beneficial considering the color and complexity of her dress. Her eyes look especially nice in the last pic and the seemingly less mannered gaze is the best of the set.

Mar 30, 2016 at 10:51 AM


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