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mikecapt wrote:
I really like the composition of #1! My only critique would be that some of the grass and hills look over exposed. I would maybe bring the exposure down a bit and increase the contrast a tad.
#2 is also interesting, but you have a fair amount of noise in the clouds that I would suggest getting rid of.
Both are great shots!
Thanks for the feedback, the brighter than normal grass is from using a yellow filter, which renders yellow grass lighter on B&W film. I agree about the visible grain in the clouds.
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Tuan Le wrote:
#1 is best for me as well for its composition. I think the image would be better if you can have more tonal separation between the land and sky or maybe crop out the sky altogether.
That's a good point about the separation with the sky. I tried cropping it out when I originally processed the shot but I wanted some more context. Thanks for the feedback.
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ShahanaPinky wrote:
Beautiful photos. But i am agree with Tuan Le.
Thanks, I'm glad you like them.
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dswiger wrote:
Like #1 the best. Not sure on the tonal separation at the sky but it still works.
Thanks for posting
Dan
Thanks for the comment and the pick Dan.
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