JimFox
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This could be an interesting study, but having the shots taken from different angles instead of all 4 season taken from the exact same spot hurts this series. Also there are some issues photographically.
In #1, the sky is too dark in the middle compared to the edges where it's almost blown out.
#2 the sky is way too bright and there is a loss of detail in the clouds. This shot needs to have been underexposed more so that the sky would look good. It also has that building in the background with the towers on the right side, also very distracting is power pole on the left side of the image.
#3 has a sky that is too bright also, underexpose for it. Also there must be some fence that surrounds the tree and the fence just poking in along the bottom is distracting, crop the fence bits out.
#4 has the least amount of distracting elements, and the exposure of the sky is pretty good. That's probably the angle you should have shot the others from. But it does have a ton of dirt and dust on the sensor. You need to clone out those dust bunnies, and then get your sensor cleaned on your camera.
I hope that helps.
Jim
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