Jim Rickards
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I really like the idea in #1, but without a bright smiling facial to go with it( like the other shots), it doesn't work for me.
#2 Three things I see wrong with this one. We only see slivers of the left arm. (She should turn more toward the camera). She's looking the wrong way. Why is she looking over there? The third thing is more of a minor nit. Compose for an even background, like what's to the right of her. The background left of her is the kind you don't want. It's nondescript but still 'busy' and can distract from the model.
#3. Nice necklace, but it's partially cropped. Have you ever looked into a girls eyes and seen round white circles? Those circles from the ring flash are very noticeable. Some will like that look, but others will focus on the unnatural catchlights instead of the beauty of the model. There is shine on the nose, forehead and cheeks.
#4 I want to like this one. I like the energy of the pose and the clean black background. What spoils it for me is the black thing in front of her.
#5 and onward - very well done.
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