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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Jenny

Congratulations to hcm228 for winning Feature Thread of the Week with 11 votes - View Previous Winners

I had a great session yesterday with another senior, Jenny, and while the weather really got hot, she hung in there and I think we got some nice images. As always CC is very welcome.

Edit: 2 more pictures added.

Edited on Jul 23, 2014 at 08:46 PM · View previous versions

Jul 22, 2014 at 01:11 AM

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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Jenny

Very nice stuff

Jul 22, 2014 at 01:27 AM

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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Jenny

Good stuff, only 3?

Jul 22, 2014 at 03:00 AM

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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Jenny

looking good

Jul 22, 2014 at 06:39 AM

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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Jenny

Wow...stunning pics!. #1 and #3 are spectacular. She must have been very happy with the results. Love it

Jul 22, 2014 at 07:19 AM

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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Jenny

These are absolutely superb! She is going to love #1. I just wish that stray hair wasn't going across her chin. Other than that, it's perfect.

Jul 22, 2014 at 08:17 AM

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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Jenny

#1 is great.
In #2 I wish she was a little more engaged or happy. I think it would fit the theme a little better. She seems bored.
#3 is nice. The lighting is great. I think the skin smoothing and eye whitening is a little much and I'm not crazy about the crossed arms. Love the styling though.

Jul 22, 2014 at 08:56 AM

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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Jenny

Thanks for all of the comments.

Teacher, good observation. I think I can kill that chin hair without too much issue.

eSchwab: I never ever whiten eyes. If veins are too bad I might desaturate, but never whiten. (although I must admit they do look a bit white. I will look into that) And as far as skin smoothing goes, she had some of the best complexion Ive ever seen. If it was a larger image I believe you could see that there is alot of detail in the skin.

That said I always appreciate the criticism. Helps me get better. Thanks.

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Jul 22, 2014 at 10:52 AM

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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Jenny

Those are fantastic images. No nits at all. As the father of 3 daughters, I only cringe to think how mature these girls look by the time they're seniors. Time to get a shotgun and a shovel!

Bob

Jul 22, 2014 at 10:59 AM

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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Jenny

No.1 is absolutely spectacular... I love it... Stray hairs or not

Jul 22, 2014 at 12:11 PM

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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Jenny

The first is a really nice shot technically.. I am wondering though, am I the only one that thinks this might be a bit too suggestive for a senior shoot? Lots of skin and little else......Mature? absolutely.

Jul 22, 2014 at 01:28 PM

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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · Jenny

Great shots

Jul 22, 2014 at 01:32 PM

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p.1 #13 · p.1 #13 · Jenny

double post.

Jul 22, 2014 at 01:39 PM

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p.1 #14 · p.1 #14 · Jenny

Medowlark wrote:
The first is a really nice shot technically.. I am wondering though, am I the only one that thinks this might be a bit too suggestive for a senior shoot? Lots of skin and little else......Mature? absolutely.

She is wearing the same outfit that you see in the bubbles photograph. That said, I see what youre saying. She liked the shot and I havent heard any complaints yet. But I will keep that in mind. Thanks.

Jul 22, 2014 at 01:47 PM

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p.1 #15 · p.1 #15 · Jenny

Very nice job and the model is shockingly beautiful....

Jul 22, 2014 at 04:18 PM

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p.1 #16 · p.1 #16 · Jenny

great shots. she wore the color turquoise and baby blue very well. :-)

i liked #3 irregardless of the crossed-arm. however she appeared slightly hunch over from my perspective.

thank you for sharing.

Jul 22, 2014 at 05:01 PM

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p.1 #17 · p.1 #17 · Jenny

Very nice!! What's the EXIF for #1?

Jul 22, 2014 at 09:22 PM

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p.1 #18 · p.1 #18 · Jenny

can0nfan2379 wrote:
Very nice!! What's the EXIF for #1?

1/125, F 2.8, Canon 70-200 is Version uno. iso 250 at 190mm

Everytime I think I have myself talked into getting verion II of that lens, I take a photo with the one I have wide open and cant imagine Im missing that much. I really like my copy.

Jul 22, 2014 at 09:28 PM

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p.1 #19 · p.1 #19 · Jenny

Wow. If there's ever been a picture-perfect face, this is it. The bright OOF area directly above her head in #2 is a little distracting, otherwise these are top shelf. I don't know who chose the flowers in #3, but the colors match quite well with her dress & lips.

Jul 22, 2014 at 10:02 PM

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p.1 #20 · p.1 #20 · Jenny

Yea, I started cloning out that open area and wasnt happy with how I was progressing with it. Might give it another shot.

She put together the headband on the way to the session. I had recommended a florist when she first asked about it (real flowers just photo better) But I must admit, she did a really good job and it definitely matches well.

Jul 22, 2014 at 10:05 PM

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