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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Tried my hand at FPJ


... and I think I did OK. You tell me.

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Jul 08, 2014 at 08:32 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Tried my hand at FPJ


Yeah it's difficult to see them. I did eventually click around enough to see them in a larger format though. Considering the task that you captured you are showing too many images. For something this simple, 1-3 images could have done it much better. It drives me crazy when I see images of people posing/smiling for other peoples cameras.
The second image is probably the best. I also like the third row, right image. Don't be afraid to zoom out and show the surroundings and get more in the images. Some of them look like there is probably something interesting going on in the background but the other child is cropped. I think you have too many close ups also. For this type of work it's ok to get in close, but also zoom out so that you can still see what's going on in the background.



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Jul 08, 2014 at 11:14 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Tried my hand at FPJ


Looking for my magnifying glass!

Post them larger - about 800 or even a bit more on the longest side. Don't go with links - many won't follow links, so you will have a smaller number of people looking at the pics.



Jul 08, 2014 at 12:04 PM





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