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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Sedona Sunset


A warm breezy summer night in Sedona..advice helpful..thanks



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Jun 10, 2014 at 12:32 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Sedona Sunset


It is a beautiful scene, love the sky, but it needs a bit more PP to spring it to life, such as contrast, shadow/highlight adjustment, & saturation, maybe warming up a bit, too. All of it can be done in ACR.

Sasha.



Jun 10, 2014 at 01:24 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Sedona Sunset


Thanks Sasha, if I do too much processing it does not look true to it's colors and I get accused of over saturating. I was trying to keep it subtle.


Jun 10, 2014 at 01:29 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Sedona Sunset


For red rock glow at sunset, "keeping subtle" is not an option
I suggest saturating only orange and yellow, and making yellow tones lighter (best when done in ACR). This will bring the natural sunshine back.

Sasha.



Jun 10, 2014 at 01:44 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Sedona Sunset


alatoo60 wrote:
It is a beautiful scene, love the sky, but it needs a bit more PP to spring it to life, such as contrast, shadow/highlight adjustment, & saturation, maybe warming up a bit, too. All of it can be done in ACR.

Sasha.


agree.

David



Jun 10, 2014 at 02:19 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Sedona Sunset


Hey Kalina,

A very cool composition. The image doesn't look overdone, but it does look like over HDR. Process it normally, and you will have a sweet shot!

Jim



Jun 10, 2014 at 03:44 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Sedona Sunset


I dont see any contrast when viewing the snapshot...something needs to be adjusted to add depth.


Jun 10, 2014 at 04:27 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Sedona Sunset


Have you tried a black and white version?


Jun 10, 2014 at 07:57 PM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Sedona Sunset


Nice shot! For my taste, the dark grays in the sky are too dark. I would 1) get rid of those really dark patches in the clouds, and 2) crop most of the bottom red rock out for what would be a more pleasing composition to my eye. Cheers!


Jun 10, 2014 at 08:04 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Sedona Sunset


I think your composition works, but the processing is too strong -- and by that I mean that you have pushed the shadows VERY far to the point where they are no longer dark, and the highlights go a bit grayish. This is especially apparent in there area where the mountains meet the sky. There is a bright halo there which is where the over recovered highlights meet the over filled shadows. I'd day back off on the shadow and highlight recovery, and let some of the true contrast in this scene help to build a sense of depth. The side lighting is wonderful, and I think it would stand out more with some nice rich shadows.


Jun 10, 2014 at 08:19 PM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Sedona Sunset


Cant say anything anyone else already has. Just don't use HDR! I'd get it done in Camera Raw or Lightroom raw...


Jun 10, 2014 at 08:57 PM
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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · Sedona Sunset


Thank you all for the helpful advise. This forum has a wealth of knowledge..thank you


Jun 11, 2014 at 05:55 PM
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p.1 #13 · p.1 #13 · Sedona Sunset


lovely image Kalina


Jun 13, 2014 at 04:08 AM
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p.1 #14 · p.1 #14 · Sedona Sunset


Went to Sedona not too long ago and was taken aback by the landscapes! Very nostalgic photo for me


Jun 13, 2014 at 06:59 PM





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