JimFox
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Hi Tront,
I have to say first off, that white border line just really hurts your shots, what is it you see in that border?
This shot has a few issues, even though a few seem to like it as it is. First, the sky has some nice stars, but the sky is too bright, it doesn't look a night sky. Second, the ground layer looks like a day shot, not a night shot. Obviously at night the ground layer usually is so dark, it's hard to see, which doesn't work well. So often we will expose the ground layer brighter than it actually was, but keeping it dark enough to maintain the feel of the night to it. Third, in the ground layer the immediate foreground is just way too bright and an odd orange color. They goes to that orange blobish ground area. I am thinking that is not where you really want the eye to go to.
Anyway, those are my thoughts. You have potential here, but it's all in the details.
Jim
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