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Ben Horne wrote:
That sure looks like a nice and calm place to hang out and enjoy the sunrise. The color and composition work for me, but I think you've pushed the image a bit too far when it comes to getting detail in the shadows and the highlights. The end result is that the sky feels a bit dark, and the foreground feels a bit bright. If this was mine, I would brighten the sky a bit to preserve the feeling of looking toward a sunrise. The water below the sun feels a bit dark, and the sky also feels a bit dark as you get away from the sun. I love how you handled the sun here since it has some color to it, so I would keep that the way you have it, but I would brighten the rest of the sky. Also, notice how the water just to the left of the middle clump of palm trees looks great, but as you get closer to the sun the water gets very dark....Show more →
Ben, thanks for your very helpful advise. Problem was that due to the stormy breeze a bracketing was impossible with the moving trees. I agree to the sky and the foreground and tried to fix it. However the water had this sharp border from bright turquois to dark blue so it has to remain as it is.
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