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ugdog
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Havana portrait
First time posting here! A portrait shot in Havana, Cuba.
Dan Callis
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Apr 28, 2014 at 10:56 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Havana portrait
I'm a newbie so take these comments with an uneducated grain of salt...
I feel like there might be a tad more room above his head than needed. Also, I feel like the DOF is a little too thin - I can't imagine you went large aperture due to low light so I think stopping down a stop or two to get his other eye in focus as well as much of his hair would have made this image more powerful.
Otherwise, GREAT subject, love the colors and framing!
Apr 28, 2014 at 02:28 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Havana portrait
Jonathan,
Thanks for your post! I agree, it could be cropped at the top a little. Regarding the shallow DOF, I personally just LOVE that.
dan
Apr 28, 2014 at 03:18 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Havana portrait
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I like the photo but would prefer to see both eyes in focus.
Apr 28, 2014 at 03:27 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Havana portrait
I also prefer great DOF.
Apr 28, 2014 at 04:30 PM
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Jonathan Huynh
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Havana portrait
Nice portrait and nice bokeh.
Apr 28, 2014 at 09:15 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Havana portrait
I like it just the way it is....and am usually a stickler for having both eyes in focus, but with this specific pose, the DOF works for me.
Apr 29, 2014 at 12:51 AM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Havana portrait
Thanks all for the comments. I really like this portrait, that's why I posted it!
dan
Apr 29, 2014 at 05:24 AM
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Natalie H
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Havana portrait
Lovely shot.
Apr 29, 2014 at 06:58 AM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Havana portrait
He has a lovely expression. Havana is such a cool place, I bet you got lots of great shots!
Apr 29, 2014 at 08:44 AM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Havana portrait
Nice shot! Did you take a look at the levels? Looks like you might be able to take the contrast up a bit for a little more depth in the darks.
Apr 29, 2014 at 10:03 AM
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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · Havana portrait
Vesper, that's a good bit of advice re: depth in the darks.
thanks,
dan
Apr 29, 2014 at 10:23 AM
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