Archive 2014 · Lauren (headshot)

reedtess
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This was taken this morning with natural light, no fill.
Lauren wanted some headshot with fitness outfit.
I thought she looked great, won't you guys agree?
She's new in modeling.
Thanks for looking.

6d + 100 f2.8L

Edited on Mar 30, 2014 at 08:43 PM · View previous versions

Mar 30, 2014 at 05:54 PM

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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Lauren (headshot)

very nice, is there a reason for her being so far left?

Mar 30, 2014 at 06:03 PM

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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Lauren (headshot)

She looks good, but the skin tone is way too yellow IMO.

Mar 30, 2014 at 06:29 PM

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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Lauren (headshot)

Yep, but can you fix the skin tones?

Mar 30, 2014 at 08:53 PM

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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Lauren (headshot)

The first one was all Photographer's preference.
2nd one for the suggestion color tone.

Mar 30, 2014 at 09:16 PM

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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Lauren (headshot)

Lovely headshot

Mar 30, 2014 at 10:41 PM

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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Lauren (headshot)

Dan Knowlton wrote:
Yep, but can you fix the skin tones?

the edit is still too yellow IMO, but at some point it becomes a matter of taste...
Here is a screen shot showing how I would edit this image:

http://www.pbase.com/meadowlark/image/155043466/original.jpg

EDIT: As I mouse over my edit I see a "2014 copyright Medowlark"... This is not my image and I certainly didn't mean for that to appear..... I'll take the edit down if the OP would like..

Mar 31, 2014 at 08:03 AM

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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Lauren (headshot)

Beautiful woman and good light. It is a slight bit distracting being so far left and part of her upper arm cropped while the other side is visible. I like the edited skin tones better.

Mar 31, 2014 at 02:44 PM

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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Lauren (headshot)

Agree too warm, even in the edited version for my liking. Place an eyedropper on her left eye, white portion. Read the numbers; R:199, G:185, B:158
Quick fix, add a Photo filter Cooling Filter(82) and adjust density. Balance of R&G at 14% looks nice and a bit warm.

Mar 31, 2014 at 07:42 PM

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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Lauren (headshot)

First of all nice photo! A couple of suggestions (IMHO):
* I would have taken the shot at eye level to avoid perspective from below. Even if it is not really obvious, it may have slightly slimmed the size of her body.
* Posture: to keep body?Face proportion, I may asked her to bring her left shoulder forward and turned it to point at the camera.

I like the face, may have changed a little bit the posture.

Great job!

Mar 31, 2014 at 07:51 PM


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