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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Sunset Girl

for your c&c

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http://i41./ael4k5.jpg
#2
http://i43./32zhmky.jpg

Oct 26, 2013 at 04:19 PM

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Crossfit!

#1, I'd clone out 3 of the 4 birds. I think the bird closest to the sun is awesome, but I don't like the other three in the picture.

#2, clone out the human looking dolphin head in the water.

Oct 26, 2013 at 06:38 PM

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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Sunset Girl

Nice ...

Oct 27, 2013 at 02:06 AM

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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Sunset Girl

Victor -

#1 - I love the background/ambient light etc. (though I'd lose the birds too), but your subject seems stuck there in mid-flight. Is this supposed to be an action photo? If so, I guess it works. Is it a posed image? Could do much better with your talented subject.

#2 - works better for me, though still seems a little out of context... Could be a great pose in a dance (or photography) studio or on stage. But this is not something I would expect to see at the beach (maybe if she were in a bikini

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Oct 27, 2013 at 02:06 PM

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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Sunset Girl

Thanks Ryan, Peter and saaketham !
I felt the birds added to the mood of the scene with the sunset but I can see why it distracts. As for the dolphin-man head I've noticed only after you told me

Both of them were shot during a hike along the beach so nothing was pre-planned. The girl is very acrobatic so we had some fun with some jumping and standing on one hand, nothing really special.I liked it so put a few for you c&c.

Oct 28, 2013 at 02:49 PM


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