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saaketham
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Seeing Green


My gf and I're pretty honest about who we feel jealous about, so it's kinda cool. But, the green-eyed monster destroys so many relationships and sometimes I find myself obsessing till I tell myself that I'm an idiot and focus on other things. So, here's my tribute to the green-eyed monster.

http://light.smugmug.com/Other/Embedding/i-ML5vLL8/0/X2/DSC_7560_pp-X2.jpg



Oct 20, 2013 at 04:07 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Seeing Green


If those eyes are real, then WOW

That said, the image does have issues IMO

Too steep on the angle. See how we cannot see whites on one side of her left eye? That is a dead giveaway that the glance angle was too severe.

Speaking of whites, the white portion looks unnatural with virtually no red. It is easy to go overboard on this, but it creates a fake looking eye.

The blown out area on her cheek is distracting.

Stray hairs on her left take away from the "clean" look you seem to have been going for.

Eyes seem slightly soft. This close, I would prefer to see razor sharp eyes.

Not sure about the expression. If the above issues were corrected, it may work nicely.

HTH

greg



Oct 20, 2013 at 11:19 PM
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Thanks for the detailed critique .. much appreciated, Greg.


Oct 20, 2013 at 11:46 PM





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