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RobWNY
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Tier - Senior Girl - 15 images

I had a last minute session scheduled where the yearbook photo was due in under 48 hours... Luckily the weather cooperated nicely that day.

These shots are a mix of natural light, and using one OCFw/a shoot through umbrella.

As always CC welcome... Thanks.

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Oct 18, 2013 at 08:47 AM

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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Tier - Senior Girl - 15 images

These are Lovely mate.
beautiful girl and you did her justice.

Plenty of variety and nice lighting and PP, she should be very pleased.

Regards
Bud

Oct 18, 2013 at 08:59 AM

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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Tier - Senior Girl - 15 images

Very nice set. I really like these. Beautiful model, and you did her justice. She seems to be having fun and she should be very happy.
Good posing, processing, framing. Lighting is very nice, esp. I like it on #9. I think an additional, tighter crop on it and some others would be great.
To nitpick, couple shots (e.g. 8, 13) seem to not have critical focus on her eyes, and the background rendering on a few (e.g. 11) is not as nice as the overall work deserves. What lens did you use?

Oct 18, 2013 at 09:16 AM

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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Tier - Senior Girl - 15 images

Beautiful girl, backgrounds, and photos! You got a wonderful variety! Total nit pick, but I wish she didn't have that darn phone in her back pocket in the last few. Calista (my 14 year old) walks around like this too and it drives me nuts! lol

Oct 18, 2013 at 09:47 AM

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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Tier - Senior Girl - 15 images

Very nice work. I find conspicuously OOF foreground a distraction, and you do feature that idea, but I may be quite alone in this.

In all, you represent the model and the setting really well. I'll bet she is pleased.

John Caldwell

Oct 18, 2013 at 10:48 AM

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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Tier - Senior Girl - 15 images

Really nice set.

My only nit is the first few shots have her forehead very bright.

#15 is my pick as best but there's many more that could be chosen.

Oct 18, 2013 at 11:16 AM

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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Tier - Senior Girl - 15 images

Great work, love the bokeh!

Oct 18, 2013 at 11:22 AM

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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Tier - Senior Girl - 15 images

I like 2 & 3. Beautiful girl, nice settings and nice poses.
Great job!
Greg

Oct 18, 2013 at 11:40 AM

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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Tier - Senior Girl - 15 images

As said, a very solid set.

Number (1) would be in the trash for me due to the strange hand pose and amputated fingers.

greg

Oct 18, 2013 at 12:08 PM

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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Tier - Senior Girl - 15 images

Appreciating the feedback... Thank you.

@VaNG-eLiS - 70-200 f/2.8 (non IS) on a 5DII for all shots.
@Lisa - I agree with the cel phone nit. I suppose I could PS it out.
@John Caldwell - True, I could have eased up on it at times for variety.
@Jim Rickards - True, a touch hot. Might revisit in pp.
@gheller - I can see your point. I was more worried about the awkward right hand in #2.

Edited on Oct 18, 2013 at 07:37 PM · View previous versions

Oct 18, 2013 at 04:10 PM

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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Tier - Senior Girl - 15 images

Excellent work; not one shot with a distraction to pull your eye away from the subject. Well done

Oct 18, 2013 at 06:32 PM

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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · Tier - Senior Girl - 15 images

Leave the phone in there, This generation is like that, she'll laugh at it in years to come.

Oct 18, 2013 at 07:50 PM

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p.1 #13 · p.1 #13 · Tier - Senior Girl - 15 images

Nicely done, I'm sure she'll love them!

Oct 18, 2013 at 07:56 PM

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p.1 #14 · p.1 #14 · Tier - Senior Girl - 15 images

A great series. She look lovely when smiling. And you showed it really good in this set

Oct 19, 2013 at 01:55 AM

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p.1 #15 · p.1 #15 · Tier - Senior Girl - 15 images

#9 is close to being a great shot. It is slightly awkward her pose. I would have adjusted her legs slightly. 14 and 15 are nice but I don't love that hunk of old rock/wood, better without. That's just my knocks otherwise it's a great set.

Oct 19, 2013 at 02:38 AM

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p.1 #16 · p.1 #16 · Tier - Senior Girl - 15 images

Nice series with variety. #2,#8 and #14 are the ones I like best.
Thanks for sharing.

Oct 19, 2013 at 06:14 AM

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p.1 #17 · p.1 #17 · Tier - Senior Girl - 15 images

nice 'senior' set

Oct 19, 2013 at 07:42 AM

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p.1 #18 · p.1 #18 · Tier - Senior Girl - 15 images

Love #9, good set

Greg

Oct 20, 2013 at 03:21 PM

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p.1 #19 · p.1 #19 · Tier - Senior Girl - 15 images

That girl does not look like she is in high school. I wished all the girls in my HS looked like this. She for sure kept her father up worrying every time she went out on a date. Great pictures of her.

Oct 21, 2013 at 02:14 PM

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p.1 #20 · p.1 #20 · Tier - Senior Girl - 15 images

You did a great job. The poses were really well done, not to mention the lighting. You brought it!

Oct 21, 2013 at 07:26 PM


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