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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · MA - Maybe ??

This could be my Monthly assignment entry (Theme:: Overhead), but something just seems off. What do you think?? Thank you, Jim

Based on John's suggestion I darken the bottom of the rail for that shadow effect.

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Oct 11, 2013 at 04:38 PM

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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · MA - Maybe ??

I don't know if you have other composition angles, but it's hard for me to tell at first what it is. The wheels, bottom of the skateboard and edges of the feet are all in the same plane so it's hard to distinguish. Since it's hard to tell, the white rail just seems to be in the way.

I like the idea. You certainly have the strictly "overhead" view!

Oct 11, 2013 at 07:19 PM

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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · MA - Maybe ??

FarmerJohn wrote:
I don't know if you have other composition angles, but it's hard for me to tell at first what it is. The wheels, bottom of the skateboard and edges of the feet are all in the same plane so it's hard to distinguish. Since it's hard to tell, the white rail just seems to be in the way.

I like the idea. You certainly have the strictly "overhead" view!

Thank you. I darkened the bottom of the rail for a shadow effect. Jim

Oct 11, 2013 at 10:10 PM

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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · MA - Maybe ??

I really like it Jim. Works with the theme and a good title.
Greg

Oct 12, 2013 at 05:25 PM

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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · MA - Maybe ??

gregfixit wrote:
I really like it Jim. Works with the theme and a good title.
Greg

Thanks Greg.

Oct 13, 2013 at 01:48 AM


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