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 p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Action Landscapes from Castle Rocks State Park, ID | |
Hey David,
I am not totally sure what I feel about this shot. It looks like a fun time for sure. My first impression was the vignetting. I think that is really sucking the life out of this shot. There is just too many dark areas in the frame, no shadow detail to speak of, so the shot ends up drowning in that darkness. I am not sure if the vignetting was intentional, I am guess it was, but I would go back and pull out all the detail. You could do a little vignetting in the upper left sky if you want to help balance the shot. But the other 3 corners should be lightened up. I would then add some contrast to the shot while not letting shadows again go dark.
Just a few thoughts for you.
Jim
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