Sunny Sra
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SargentRay wrote:
Sunny i must say i am really impressed if this is actually a first studio lighting experience for you. Bravo mon ami !
A couple of things could be improved for your next shootings, if i may ?
1-) The background is way to close to the subject and the wrinkles become apparent in the seamless.
Perhaps you could not move it away not having enough room.
2-) In my opinion, posture, choice of dress and especially this beautiful couch create a very nice setting for the kind of portrait you were going for, but then again it was not suppose to be an ad for the couch either. In that respect maybe there is just a little to much space around your subject giving just as much importance to the couch as to the model. Maybe cropping in closer around the couch and model would bring back attention on the subject.
3-) For me shot # 1 and 5 are the strongest compositions of the set. I would only suggest being more careful with such angles of shooting as in #1. First the shoe in the forward field will always appear bigger at such a low angle. If you look closely at the shot although it is a beautiful footwear it appears bigger than the head of your subject. Raising camera angle a bit would diminish this effect as well as expose less of the models nostrils which i was always told was to be avoided at all costs when doing a portrait.
I mention this simply because this was pointed out to me in this self portrait i did last fall, while testing my new flash heads.
Hope you receive this as constructive criticism for a job already very well done.
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Ray,
Thank you for the feedback, this is exactly what I was looking for..and now the shoe looks huge. Cropping is one of areas i struggle with in portraits...and i think its highly subjective area. Last time i was told i cropped too much 
Its a good learning experience, and i look forward to more critique and feedback from you.
Thank you
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