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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Yellowstone Series

These were all taken in the last couple of days. The weather seems to be moving fallish and there have been some great clouds. Trying to apply some of the tips I've received after recents posts. Really appreciate any C/C re: photo or PP. Thanks for looking.

Aug 28, 2013 at 10:52 PM

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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Yellowstone Series

The clouds in #4 make it for me, great shots all.

Aug 28, 2013 at 11:07 PM

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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Yellowstone Series

nice comps, nice clouds. It is easy for the light to blow out details, you chose nice time of day to shoot.

Aug 28, 2013 at 11:26 PM

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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Yellowstone Series

The last one is a beauty

Aug 28, 2013 at 11:33 PM

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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Yellowstone Series

Very nice, #1 and 2 are my favorites.

Jim

Aug 29, 2013 at 12:48 AM

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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Yellowstone Series

Last one has fabulous clouds!

Aug 29, 2013 at 01:16 AM

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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Yellowstone Series

I think the lighting in #2 is very interesting. It does seem to need a bit more contrast and PP but even as is I like it and it is my favorite. #1 could be improved by correcting the distortion. (That should be an easy fix with the distort-liquefy tool.) The clouds in #4 are great but I think a different crop would make an improvement. As is the horizon is too close to center. You could crop either the foreground or some of the clouds. I would crop off some of the foreground.

Sorry if my comments are more picky than you would like but you did ask for C&C. Overall, I think this is a really nice series.

Aug 29, 2013 at 07:38 AM

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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Yellowstone Series

All very nice but have to agree with the rest that the 4th is best!
Eric

Aug 29, 2013 at 08:14 AM

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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Yellowstone Series

Great series, all of them, but No.4 calls to me the most.

Aug 29, 2013 at 12:07 PM

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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Yellowstone Series

Thanks for the comments. An old dog here learning a little at a time. Will have to do a little research on the distort/liquefy tool.

Aug 29, 2013 at 02:38 PM

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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Yellowstone Series

If you're using Lightroom, use the Straightening tool..see if that helps.

Aug 29, 2013 at 02:39 PM

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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · Yellowstone Series

Thanks for the idea, Sunny. Neither straightening nor lens distortion provide a complete fix. I see where liquefy could work but it will take some trial and error- it seems a pretty complex tool when you want precise lines. Again, thanks for your input.

Aug 29, 2013 at 04:07 PM


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