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Kohala wrote:
Frankly, there's nothing good about this pose.
1. This is the infamous "linebacker" pose. Facing the camera straight on usually makes the model look heavier. Not a good thing.
2. The eyes appear out of focus and the model is squinting.
3. The expression is awkward. She looks pained.
4. Her hair is a mess
5. Her skin looks over processed.
She is very attractive and deserved better.
Sorry for being so harsh, but you seem to be immune to criticism.
Again, you failed to read my original post, you failed to read what I was looking for advice or criticism on, and you missed the ballpoint by miles.
Also, now you're just trolling as you ignored my post right above yours and you're probably just upset that I think that your critique is useless. I'm going to retort your critique just for the fun of it.
1. I never asked for advice on the pose, check out the photos on my website, I know how to pose people for head shots already (I got a great tip as well from another member in this thread and from looking at other professional photographers work), also this pose can be used with various other poses.
2. The eyes are in tack sharp focus and could be made even sharper through PP. Even if they were soft it's irrelevant I never asked for advice on that.
3. The expression is irrelevant, I never asked for advice on the expression. I would look pained or lugubrious as well holding a 5 in 1 reflector trying to smile. Again, never asked for criticism or advice on that so it's irrelevant.
4. I could care less about her hair, I asked for advice on the lighting not her hair or smile, please read a post thoroughly next time or learn how to critique from the posters that I mentioned in my prior post that did a great job.
5. This post of yours has me asking myself if you're trolling or not. You might be asking yourself why. The reason being is that the photos are straight out of the camera unedited.....no skin processing, blemish removing, white balance correction, or sharpening was done on any of these photos.
Theres no point in me continuing to read future posts because I already got the critique that I needed.
Edited on Aug 29, 2013 at 07:19 PM · View previous versions
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