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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · My daughter


Window natural light could not pass up the opportunity to take a shot

Danny







Aug 25, 2013 at 03:51 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · My daughter


Awesome......crop a tad off the right side?


Aug 25, 2013 at 04:09 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · My daughter


Danny,
Beautiful natural tones. wonderfully done.



Aug 25, 2013 at 04:19 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · My daughter


beautiful daughter, exceptional photo.


Aug 25, 2013 at 06:43 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · My daughter


Danny: stunning photo of a beautiful young woman. Great use of the window light. I agree with Michael Parris on the idea of cropping a little on the right.


Aug 25, 2013 at 07:28 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · My daughter


Thank you guys appreciate the comments and critique and maybe I will frame this one and crop a bit on the right


Danny



Aug 25, 2013 at 07:44 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · My daughter


Natural lighting, natural beauty. Wonderful! I do find the highlights on her sweater a bit distracting. However, I'm not even sure I'm qualified to critique.


Aug 25, 2013 at 09:46 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · My daughter


Super shot mate.



Aug 25, 2013 at 11:36 PM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · My daughter


Very nice shot. Gotta love window light.

The only small nit is the extra bright spot on her wrist. (and the watermark).



Aug 25, 2013 at 11:49 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · My daughter


Lovely!


Aug 26, 2013 at 08:27 PM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · My daughter


great pose and great light!


Aug 26, 2013 at 10:02 PM
danlona
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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · My daughter


Thank you all , yes the sweater is a bit distracting the area where the sun really shine on, I had tried to darken a bit

Danny



Aug 26, 2013 at 10:12 PM
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p.1 #13 · p.1 #13 · My daughter


She is gorgeous! If you want to tone down that bright spot, try making a blank layer. Use the eye dropper and sample a color of skin nearby. Change the blending mode of your layer to 'color burn.' Use a low opacity brush (start with 10-15%) and paint on the color onto the bright spot with a soft brush. It will tone it down quite a bit.


Aug 27, 2013 at 12:19 AM
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p.1 #14 · p.1 #14 · My daughter


nice capture...


Aug 27, 2013 at 12:40 AM
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p.1 #15 · p.1 #15 · My daughter


Excellent shot


Aug 27, 2013 at 09:57 AM
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p.1 #16 · p.1 #16 · My daughter


Very nicely done.


Aug 27, 2013 at 10:26 AM
danlona
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p.1 #17 · p.1 #17 · My daughter


Thank you all again and Thanks Lisa for your input I will certainly try your method greatly appreciated


Danny



Aug 27, 2013 at 02:46 PM
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p.1 #18 · p.1 #18 · My daughter


Lovely daughter. She has beautiful hair, sweater, expression, and a very comfortable pose. I make it a habit never to put a model in a place where there is a bright spot of sun hitting her or her clothes. It creates problems that are difficult to correct later if its even possible. Moving her to her left a foot or so would have vanished this problem and the light would have been just as nice and the background may even have been better (from what little we can see now). The window is awfully bright. It's worth doing it over if you can.


Aug 27, 2013 at 06:58 PM





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