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mcarlson
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Scrapyard Fashion


Greetings - I'm primarily a sports shooter, but occasionally enjoy a break from the routine with some portraiture. I recently had a chance to shoot in a location I often passed and wondered what it really looked like beyond what I could see from the road. I stopped one day and took a walk through this scrapyard and it was even better than I'd hoped, with plenty of natural vegetation mixing with some well-aged vehicles. More from the shoot can be viewed here.

I already know some flaws, but would appreciate any C&C anyone has to share.

Thanks,

Mike



























Aug 24, 2013 at 02:04 PM
Ian Boys
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Scrapyard Fashion


Lovely setting and colours, not sure about the quite harsh light. Worth shooting more with Kelsey I think.


Aug 24, 2013 at 03:48 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Scrapyard Fashion


She has a rust spot on her dress in #3. My eye went right to that.


Aug 25, 2013 at 09:27 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Scrapyard Fashion


I love these type of locations. Have you tied this shoot in B/W? J. R.


Aug 25, 2013 at 09:40 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Scrapyard Fashion


Thanks guys - Ian...sometimes it seems all Florida has is harsh light... gome1122 - I should have had her change her 'belt' since it isn't a rust spot, but rather a feather that's dangling (one of the 'flaws' I'm already punishing myself for). And yes, JR - some look good in B/W, but some are just too textured for it to really be contrasting enough, and the models just blend in too much.


Aug 25, 2013 at 10:09 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Scrapyard Fashion


mcarlson wrote:
gome1122 - I should have had her change her 'belt' since it isn't a rust spot, but rather a feather that's dangling (one of the 'flaws' I'm already punishing myself for).


I see it now.



Aug 25, 2013 at 12:01 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Scrapyard Fashion


Fantastic spot, would love to find a little spot like that.
Considering the harsh light these are great, framing in the last is super.

A little too contrasty in some and a fill light would have helped just to bring the faces out a bit.

Hope to see more from the location.

Regards
Bud



Aug 25, 2013 at 11:42 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Scrapyard Fashion


gome1122 wrote:
She has a rust spot on her dress in #3. My eye went right to that.



It's a feather and part of her accessories.



Aug 26, 2013 at 08:51 AM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Scrapyard Fashion


Nice location. Some good shots here. I agree the light may be a bit to contrasty.


Aug 26, 2013 at 08:52 AM





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