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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Sinead

Aug 16, 2013 at 08:22 AM

Jim Rickards
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Sinead

You obviously used a wide open aperture or one nearly so.

I think more sharpness in her hair and other parts of her would be a good thing so I'm thinking stopping down would have helped you.

Aug 16, 2013 at 02:33 PM

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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Sinead

Super pretty model and nice light too

I think her hand doesn't really add anything to this image and is actually a bit distracting. Nice depth of field. I also think that her hair covers a bit too big part of her face.

Do you have more pics from the shoot?

Aug 16, 2013 at 03:29 PM

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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Sinead

The bump on her nose is amplified by the lighting, maybe you can help it? Looks like it has had skin softening done a bit too much on the left side.

Aug 16, 2013 at 06:33 PM

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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Sinead

Very pretty model, the eyes need to be a bit shaper (especially the right eye) imho. Thank you for sharping.

Aug 16, 2013 at 06:38 PM

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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Sinead

Yeah, I don't usually pick on things being out of focus, but I think for a shot like this, where it's setup, the mouth shouldn't be sharper than the eyes. But the rest is very nice.

--David

Aug 16, 2013 at 09:22 PM

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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Sinead

I would stop it down a bit and be sure to focus on her eyes.

Aug 17, 2013 at 12:37 AM


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