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Archive 2013 · Lena in the bedroom

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Any Opinion?
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Jul 31, 2013 at 10:18 PM

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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Lena in the bedroom

Excellence lighting .

Jul 31, 2013 at 11:35 PM

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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Lena in the bedroom

My opinion is there should me more the one photo on this subject matter.

Jul 31, 2013 at 11:37 PM

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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Lena in the bedroom

I have one but after reading the forum rules, well...I'll just say it's a great pic

Jul 31, 2013 at 11:42 PM

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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Lena in the bedroom

Great photo no doubt. However, one thing that got my attention was the wrinkles in the attire on the lower part of her stomach. At first I was like, is that her stomach? Then I realized it was the garment. Or at least I think it's the garment. Don't ask me why that stuck out to me with such a beautiful subject, but it caught my attention right off the bat. None the less, excellent photo.

Aug 01, 2013 at 02:17 AM

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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Lena in the bedroom

travis_smith wrote:
Great photo no doubt. However, one thing that got my attention was the wrinkles in the attire on the lower part of her stomach. At first I was like, is that her stomach? Then I realized it was the garment. Or at least I think it's the garment. Don't ask me why that stuck out to me with such a beautiful subject, but it caught my attention right off the bat. None the less, excellent photo.

That's the last thing I was looking at

Fantastic all around.
Lets see some more please.

Aug 01, 2013 at 06:34 AM

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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Lena in the bedroom

Many opinions, thanks for asking.

I like the general lighting, the outfit, pose, expression, mood. I like that you captured the sheer fabric well.

There are a few things that grab my attention and detract. It looks like your light is in the far right frame and should be cropped out. The lilies closest to the flash are blown out and draw attention away from the subject. Also the reflection of light on the wall by the headboard is a bit bright, maybe you can tone it down a notch in PP.

Aug 01, 2013 at 07:25 AM

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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Lena in the bedroom

Excellent lighting, perfect post process. Model's attitude, clothing and pose all very near perfection in my view. Like mentioned before, hot spots on the wall and on the lilies attract the eye a little. Also the sunken right hand in the mattress makes the fingers stand on the edge of the mattress all by themselves, it looks a little strange. But just details to me, this shot deserves a 99% overall grade.

Excellent work sir.

Aug 01, 2013 at 11:15 AM

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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Lena in the bedroom

Thank You I am happy despite imperfection some fox like it

Aug 01, 2013 at 12:27 PM

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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Lena in the bedroom

Nice lighting, etc as others have noted. My comment would be that I think she is looking to far to the side with her eyes. The eye nearest the camera looks a little weird because of the sideways glance.
Jack

Aug 01, 2013 at 01:27 PM

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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Lena in the bedroom

gempixel wrote:
My opinion is there should me more the one photo on this subject matter.

100% agree!

Very hot! Nice work!

Aug 01, 2013 at 05:35 PM

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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · Lena in the bedroom

Alex - killing it dude. Glad your posting your work here. Very inspiring.

Aug 02, 2013 at 10:16 AM

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p.1 #13 · p.1 #13 · Lena in the bedroom

I like the photo and admire the composition and background choices. The flowers balance the subject quite well.

The only nits I see are some hot areas in the lighting. The flowers parts that are blown out don't concern me, but the underarm hot spot is drawing the eye a bit. I think a little less light there would be better.

And a really small nit - the right eye is "over too far". If she looks a bit farther to her left, that eye will be surrounded by the white of her eye - best case.

Aug 02, 2013 at 04:43 PM


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