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RobWNY
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Silvia - Child Portraits


Individual shots from a family shoot in June... CC always welcome

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2. Color


3. B&W conversion


4. B&W conversion



Jul 12, 2013 at 12:29 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Silvia - Child Portraits


Cute little girl. Nice photos. I think they are all a little too light (overexposed).


Jul 12, 2013 at 02:10 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Silvia - Child Portraits


The black and white versions are my picks here. Just too light for the colors in the color captures.
Douglas



Jul 12, 2013 at 07:03 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Silvia - Child Portraits


+1 on exposure


Jul 12, 2013 at 07:22 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Silvia - Child Portraits


Really like#3 best. I like the last one too, but I'm finding her nail polish, for lack of a better term... unexpected.

The first two are nice, but I'm in the camp that it's overexposed.



Jul 12, 2013 at 07:27 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Silvia - Child Portraits


Agree with most of the comments.

A small point - the background blurring in #1 is not as pleasing as the others. Not sure if you used different apertures or if it's just a result of the blurring at a greater distance.



Jul 13, 2013 at 05:44 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Silvia - Child Portraits


I do like B&W version, photo # 3 rock.


Jul 14, 2013 at 10:55 PM
RobWNY
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Silvia - Child Portraits


Thank you all. Appreciate the CC.


Jul 15, 2013 at 08:43 AM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Silvia - Child Portraits


WB looks funky. It seems cool and green. Was this an effect you were after?

Are you using a calibrated monitor? I'm wondering if the exposure and WB issues are stemming from your monitor not being calibrated.



Jul 15, 2013 at 09:55 AM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Silvia - Child Portraits


dmacmillan wrote:
WB looks funky. It seems cool and green. Was this an effect you were after?

Are you using a calibrated monitor? I'm wondering if the exposure and WB issues are stemming from your monitor not being calibrated.



Agree 100% These are nice shots, but you need to warm them up a lot. Also, see if you can tone down the background exposure a bit. Her skin seems a little too hot, but nothing egregious.

Nice black and white, by the way!



Jul 15, 2013 at 11:04 AM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Silvia - Child Portraits


dmacmillan wrote:
WB looks funky. It seems cool and green. Was this an effect you were after?

Are you using a calibrated monitor? I'm wondering if the exposure and WB issues are stemming from your monitor not being calibrated.


Monitor has been calibrated, but not in a while... it is surely due for a re-calibration.

The green was not really the effect I was going for. In fact it was much worse before processing the raw... This was all natural light, and with her being so close to the ground cover of green I was getting it reflected back up into her face. In retrospect I wish I used some artificial light.

I think I'll take another stab at processing this after monitor recal.

Thanks again for all the CC!



Jul 15, 2013 at 11:59 AM
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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · Silvia - Child Portraits


It's amazing how green the light can get from the surrounding foliage. I find a WhiBal card helps get me in the ballpark of what I want. I just shoot a quick frame. I tune that frame in Lightroom and apply the settings to the rest of the photos in the series.


Jul 15, 2013 at 12:38 PM
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p.1 #13 · p.1 #13 · Silvia - Child Portraits


No one has mentioned that the little girl appears relaxed and comfortable. Very nice. B&W is definitely the way to go with these.


Jul 15, 2013 at 09:18 PM
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p.1 #14 · p.1 #14 · Silvia - Child Portraits


She's a gorgeous girl and I love the natural expression in #2...she looks very content. I would pull down the exposure and pull UP the warmth on these.


Jul 15, 2013 at 09:39 PM
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p.1 #15 · p.1 #15 · Silvia - Child Portraits


Agree with the above on exposure, wb, nice bws.


Jul 16, 2013 at 09:33 PM





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