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Archive 2013 · A girl and a bike... 1 image

bbourizk
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · A girl and a bike... 1 image

Just finished editing this one and thought I'd whack it up for you to see what you think.
I have one without the forklift but I'm sort of liking it there.

http://studio102.net/uploads/laura/_DSC1119.jpg

Thanks for looking
Bud

Jun 10, 2013 at 08:34 AM

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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · A girl and a bike... 1 image

That's a woman and a chopper, hugh difference. Very nice work.

Jun 10, 2013 at 08:40 AM

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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · A girl and a bike... 1 image

Forklift? What forklift? Nice light and pose, the smoke adds nothing for me.

Jun 10, 2013 at 08:44 AM

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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · A girl and a bike... 1 image

Agree - no forklift issues and the smoke doesn't add anything for me. Makes me wonder why there is smoke there.

All that said, this is a nice shot.

Jun 10, 2013 at 09:45 AM

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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · A girl and a bike... 1 image

Bud, lovely model and rad chopper. Setting doesn't really work for me, but I don't think it's the forklift. I keep looking at the light on the model's face, and I wonder if it could have been softened more.

EDIT: I'm at home on my calibrated monitor now, and I don't see the harsh light I thought I saw earlier. Works well now.

The smoke looks like someone was smoking a cigarette just off camera right about halfway between the camera and model. So I'm with the others on the smoke.

It's a good picture, but I've seen you do better.

Edited on Jun 10, 2013 at 08:52 PM · View previous versions

Jun 10, 2013 at 10:21 AM

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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · A girl and a bike... 1 image

Jim Rickards wrote:
Agree - no forklift issues and the smoke doesn't add anything for me. Makes me wonder why there is smoke there.

All that said, this is a nice shot.

The smoke is there because she is smokin hot.

Jun 10, 2013 at 10:59 AM

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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · A girl and a bike... 1 image

woa..nice lighting ...love it

Jun 10, 2013 at 06:51 PM

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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · A girl and a bike... 1 image

ronlane wrote:
That's a woman and a chopper, hugh difference. Very nice work.
Thanks for taking a look Ron.

Jun 10, 2013 at 09:52 PM

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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · A girl and a bike... 1 image

coreybell wrote:
Forklift? What forklift? Nice light and pose, the smoke adds nothing for me.

Thanks Corey,
i have similar shots with no smoke but just trying something else.
Regards
Bud

Jun 10, 2013 at 10:04 PM

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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · A girl and a bike... 1 image

Jim Rickards wrote:
Agree - no forklift issues and the smoke doesn't add anything for me. Makes me wonder why there is smoke there.

All that said, this is a nice shot.
Thanks Jim.

Jun 10, 2013 at 10:04 PM

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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · A girl and a bike... 1 image

friscoron wrote:
Bud, lovely model and rad chopper. Setting doesn't really work for me, but I don't think it's the forklift. I keep looking at the light on the model's face, and I wonder if it could have been softened more.

EDIT: I'm at home on my calibrated monitor now, and I don't see the harsh light I thought I saw earlier. Works well now.

The smoke looks like someone was smoking a cigarette just off camera right about halfway between the camera and model. So I'm with the others on the smoke.

It's a good picture, but I've seen you do better.

Hey Mate,
I had a look at it on an uncalibrated monitor and it looks like crap.
The smoke is from a smoke machine and it's in between frames so some have more smoke some none.
Was just going for a bit of variety.

Regards
Bud

Jun 10, 2013 at 11:19 PM

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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · A girl and a bike... 1 image

Yudhi wrote:
woa..nice lighting ...love it

Thanks mate.

Jun 10, 2013 at 11:37 PM

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p.1 #13 · p.1 #13 · A girl and a bike... 1 image

Stunning. Nice work.

Jun 10, 2013 at 11:48 PM

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p.1 #14 · p.1 #14 · A girl and a bike... 1 image

Other then knocking some little reflections off the fork lift I like it as is.
Good job Mate.

(The back tire looks a little low)

Jun 11, 2013 at 05:21 AM

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p.1 #15 · p.1 #15 · A girl and a bike... 1 image

What forklift asks GeorgieGirl's hubby....

Jun 11, 2013 at 07:28 PM

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p.1 #16 · p.1 #16 · A girl and a bike... 1 image

sparkeee wrote:
Stunning. Nice work.

Thanks Mate.

Jun 11, 2013 at 11:27 PM

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p.1 #17 · p.1 #17 · A girl and a bike... 1 image

pokemanyz wrote:
Other then knocking some little reflections off the fork lift I like it as is.
Good job Mate.

(The back tire looks a little low)

Thanks mate,
That tire does look a little low from this angle.
Bud

Jun 11, 2013 at 11:28 PM

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p.1 #18 · p.1 #18 · A girl and a bike... 1 image

GeorgieGirl wrote:
What forklift asks GeorgieGirl's hubby....

I'm glad GeorgieGirl's Hubby liked it

Jun 11, 2013 at 11:28 PM


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