Archive 2013 · Scottsdale AZ Civic Center senior portrait shoot

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p.1 #1 · Scottsdale AZ Civic Center senior portrait shoot

Quick afternoon shoot of the daughter of the girl I dated in High school.

Lit with a Vivitar in a Lastolite Ezbox on a stick - aimed by VAL, fired with PWs

mistakenly started in JPG, hard to recover and process

more later

May 15, 2013 at 02:14 AM

Yudhi
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p.1 #2 · Scottsdale AZ Civic Center senior portrait shoot

nice set bro....love them al....:

May 15, 2013 at 03:33 AM

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p.1 #3 · Scottsdale AZ Civic Center senior portrait shoot

A few nice images in there, but why present them this way?.
It's distracting and takes away from the images.

In the 1st the image needs that open space that the young lady is looking into.

The second image looks like it was cropped to include the smaller frame. you cut off her shoes.

Top left in the third looks like the best of those 3 and would have liked to see it by itself.

4 is just odd with half a foot here and a calf there. Bottom left is the best image in that series.

you have some nice images that for me are ruined by the way they are presented.

Regards
Bud

May 15, 2013 at 08:31 AM

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p.1 #4 · Scottsdale AZ Civic Center senior portrait shoot

yeah, these were just quick comps.. honestly just grabbed one shot from each set with the most open space and plugged the others in. No worries... ruined

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May 15, 2013 at 09:44 AM

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p.1 #5 · Scottsdale AZ Civic Center senior portrait shoot

I agree with bbourizk. I would also drop a couple of the uncomfortable expressions. The skin tones are a little off in the last grouping but I really like the colors from dress to background.

May 15, 2013 at 12:10 PM

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p.1 #6 · Scottsdale AZ Civic Center senior portrait shoot

color contrast with her dress and background on the last set seem to work the best for me! Nice job!

May 16, 2013 at 03:35 PM


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