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Archive 2013 · Kelsey - Ethereal, Dreamy Photoshoot

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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Kelsey - Ethereal, Dreamy Photoshoot

Hello, all. This is my first upload to FM, although I've been lurking for ages. Earlier this week, I had a photo shoot with Kelsey. I wanted to capture something fresh and dreamy. C&C is appreciated and more than welcome.

Thanks!

Apr 24, 2013 at 10:20 AM

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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Kelsey - Ethereal, Dreamy Photoshoot

Great set, Really love #5!

Apr 24, 2013 at 10:39 AM

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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Kelsey - Ethereal, Dreamy Photoshoot

Welcome to FM! You certainly named this appropriately, giving your shooting style and post-processing. Definitely a different, and creatively interesting look. No real fave for me, I liked them all equally. Nice job!

Apr 24, 2013 at 11:27 AM

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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Kelsey - Ethereal, Dreamy Photoshoot

I didn't care for the first two. I see blurry stuff near the eyes in #1 and a poor shoulder position in #2.

After that, I'm very impressed. Nice work indeed.

#3 Really like this one. I'd suggest cropping inwards a bit. Lose the rock, right side of the bench, but definitely keep the shoes. Take away some of the top, making her larger in the frame.

#4. Even with the dragonfly necklace askew, this is a great shot.

#5 Another beauty. I'm for cropping the left side of this one, but it's a minor thing, as it looks good as is.

Apr 24, 2013 at 12:30 PM

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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Kelsey - Ethereal, Dreamy Photoshoot

Thanks very much!

Jim, I will try playing around with the cropping on the two you suggested.

Apr 24, 2013 at 01:33 PM

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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Kelsey - Ethereal, Dreamy Photoshoot

Nice work... last two are my favs

Apr 24, 2013 at 07:59 PM

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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Kelsey - Ethereal, Dreamy Photoshoot

5 is my favorite.

Good work.

Apr 24, 2013 at 08:10 PM

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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Kelsey - Ethereal, Dreamy Photoshoot

#3 is very good... there's just something about this shot. it's very natural, very organic, and feels like it's from another time. a slower time.

#4 is a nice portrait but think about messing with your crop

Apr 25, 2013 at 10:12 AM

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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Kelsey - Ethereal, Dreamy Photoshoot

I really like the first image - except for the stick that goes through her head like an arrow. That same stick is also found in the second image, but there is so much other background clutter, it tends to get lost more.

I'm drawn to the close up images too. Perhaps there is too much space left on the others. I don't know....

Apr 25, 2013 at 01:29 PM

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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Kelsey - Ethereal, Dreamy Photoshoot

The D90 is a great camera. You have a winner in number 5

Apr 25, 2013 at 06:59 PM


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