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It's better composition, but the shadows are too harsh, background is soft, and colors not as brilliant as they could be.
Your picture has enough dynamic range to pull out shadows without revealing noise, so you can easily adjust them by "shadows and highlights" tool. I prefer to convert to Lab color space and apply this tool only to L channel, this way, the color information stays undisturbed.
Your Exif data do not reveal your settings otherwise I would be able to tell you what needs to be changed in order to achieve better results. In general, try to shoot using hyperfocal distance; this way, your shot will be reasonably sharp all way through.
Another problem with your picture is this:
Color Space Uncalibrated
X-Resolution 300 dpi
Y-Resolution 300 dpi
For picture to look good on a web, you need to save it as sRGB, 72 dpi - and please sharpen it after resizing.
Also, there is "Critique" FM forum where you can get a bunch of specific advice on composition, settings and post processing.
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I remember that Loch Loyne viewpoint from the days before people started to deface it with piles of rock, why do people feel the need to make a mark on the landscape?