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hi all,

took this today in the pouring rain. all comments and suggestions are greatly appreciated.

thanks,
ana

1. http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8344/8183706595_57ed374a84_z.jpg



Nov 13, 2012 at 08:07 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · abandoned (one photo for c&c)


Fantastic processing. It gives the mood of desolation very well. I would give more room at the top, perhaps a square crop; the grey sky and barren trees would enhance the scene well.


Nov 13, 2012 at 10:10 PM
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Exposure, processing and location are great. I would also like slightly looser framing maybe 10% and a level camera with crop or tilt shift to keep the verticals from leaning back. You could do this with perspective correction. If you have the image any wider. Lovely work overall. You really capture the gloom of the scene.


Nov 14, 2012 at 02:08 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · abandoned (one photo for c&c)


Its all been said other than you have posted the photo too small try 1024 x 1024 to do it justice. and the respect you both deserve.


Nov 14, 2012 at 03:41 AM
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ifaynshteyn wrote:
Fantastic processing. It gives the mood of desolation very well. I would give more room at the top, perhaps a square crop; the grey sky and barren trees would enhance the scene well.


thank you for the comments. after i did the shot in a hurry and left (camera and i were soaked from heavy rain) i realized i should have shot it looser. i wasnt going to go back because it's a far walk and i was already worried about the fact that everything was wet. i will plan on trying to redo the shot, but for me it never seems to look right the second time...



Nov 14, 2012 at 08:46 AM
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saneproduction wrote:
Exposure, processing and location are great. I would also like slightly looser framing maybe 10% and a level camera with crop or tilt shift to keep the verticals from leaning back. You could do this with perspective correction. If you have the image any wider. Lovely work overall. You really capture the gloom of the scene.


thank you. i wish i had a wider version... i might try to redo it and might try out a few different lenses, being that this location is close to where i live.



Nov 14, 2012 at 08:49 AM
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Killer !


Nov 14, 2012 at 08:53 AM
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Bill Gass wrote:
Killer !


thanks Bill!



Nov 14, 2012 at 09:04 AM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · abandoned (one photo for c&c)


Really nice either way!


Nov 14, 2012 at 11:21 AM
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Excellent

Rags



Nov 14, 2012 at 12:34 PM
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Mike and Rags: thank you!


Nov 14, 2012 at 01:18 PM





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