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This started in reply to Javier's thread, it was quite timely for me as I'd just offered a workshop in what I consider a safe and friendly enviroment.
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Introduction

This is a reworking of a reply on an internet forum I made to a photographer looking to improve his photography.

It’s now becoming an essay on my philosophy and methodology of my photography and possibly the basis of a short workshop that I’ll be holding soon.

It is not complete, finished or in any way guaranteed to ever be so, (or indeed to be useful, in any way, to anyone else, except me!)

It doesn’t deal in specifics very much, either.

It asks questions that I don’t answer. It’s up to you to find out if you are right.

I only make one specific reccomendation for one specific source of information. I personally rate it highly.

For all your information you should go and find lots of sources and learn to judge the quality of the advice given. Including this! Especially this.

Aimed at improving photographers with a keen interest, this essay is only intended to draw attention to somewhat underused, and indeed, often ignored aspects of photography.

A couple of points before we start, to set the scene, as it were.

The easiest and most obvious things to get wrong in photography are the exposure and the focus. These, however, are really minor ingredients of a great photograph. I’m not going to give them much time.

Correcting them is just practice, based on a little understanding.

Exposure and focus are simple skills we aquire. Just screwdrivers and spanners in our toolbox. The longer we use them, the easier we find them to handle. They are a means to an end, not a goal in themselves.

For exposure, the information on the ISO, f-stop and shutter speed triangle doesn’t change, so I won’t repeat it. Look it up, then practice it. Lots.

The tips and tricks for capturing steady, sharp, well focused shots are well written up too. Look it up, then practice it. Lots

But never forget, it’s just a tool, not the end goal.

What I really believe brings an image to life is the composition, the lighting and the relationship with the subject.

I believe these are the true basics of photography.

Composition is partly a matter of psychological manipulation of your viewer, personal taste and sheer artistry. Again, it’s a well documented subject that I can only hope to scratch the surface of, make you more aware of, and hope you look further into the subject.

Lighting. I really hope that I can inspire people to look at the light that creates our images in a more comprehensive way, to study and become aware of the one thing that makes the photos we take possible.

Most important of all is the relationship you have with your subject. This is the driving force that moves us to take a photo in the first place. Being aware of that relationship can affect the rest of the decisions you make in the photographic process.

As you read this, I want you to think, and do other research, if I mention something that doesn’t seem to make sense, or use a term you don’t understand, please, please go and look it up.

I could do with comments and suggestions about what is and isn’t clear and what is and isn’t helpful.

A quick glimpse into the mind of this photographer.

The way I see it there are five things I do in order* before I take a photo.

- I relate to my subject.
- I light my subject.
- I compose my image.
- I work out the exposure for my image.
- I focus my camera on my subject.

Only then do I take the photo.

*This is a simple lie, that is useful to understanding. As although this looks like a set order, in reality, it is more like a flow chart, with the question, “Am I happy with this image?” between each step.**

If no, I backtrack to the item that needs to change and start again.

If I’m not happy, after I’ve taken the shot, then I go through it again and take another shot.

** That was a more complex lie, it’s more than that too, it’s a dynamic thought process based on a web of interactions between these five aspects. You’ve got to break it down somehow though!

It works for me, I hope it can bring insight to others.

It seems to me that a lot of people get hooked up on the last two elements of this order without fully considering the first three. This might get nicely exposed, focused photos, but it’s also a way of taking a lot of dull, poorly lit photos with no consideration for composition.

Let’s look at the points in order:

Relating to your subject

If you have no feeling for your subject, it’s not likely you are going to produce an image with a ‘Wow!’ factor.

In portraiture, getting on well with the people you are photographing is key.

You have to ask yourself how willing are my subjects to help me get a beautiful shot?

The better you get on, the more relaxed they will be and the more they will risk for you!

A shoot going well has a lovely mood. For me, keeping that mood overrides all other technical issues.

You see too many technically perfect shots of bored wives and girlfriends or people with the ‘am I doing this right face’.

Reassurance and humour are great tools here.

Of course, the subject doesn’t have to be a person, it could be a landscape or a car, but the way you think of it will define what lengths you will go to in order to get that definitive photo.

Using humour and reassurance here will only be for your own benefit…

Light

THIS is the key, the light. This is the thing that it’s all about and that so many, many people miss.

You’re using a camera. It exists because of light, light is it’s thing.

Photography.

It’s all about the light.

A photographer I was helping out the other day was struggling in a room with bright sunlight streaming in through tall narrow windows. He just didn’t understand that the combination of window light and a golden reflection from the floor was giving near perfect light. All his shots were just overblown or shadows.
The five words that blew his mind and took his photography to a new level were “it’s all about the light.” Suddenly he was edge lighting, backlighting, using fill, keeping the highlights out of the background. All with just the light in the room. It was such a great epiphany to watch.

Question? generally, one very bright, continuous point source of light, high overhead is about as unflattering as possible. Shadows are well defined and the light is hard.
Think about what circumstances that happens in and particularly, what drops into shadow on a person’s face in that circumstance. I’m not asking you to post the answer!

Better lighting situations are when the light is moderated, usually at a lower angle, light coming through a window, light bouncing off water, light from the setting sun, places where light comes from more than one direction, these are good situations to look for and play with.

Question: Why?

I have a ‘found light’ project where I take a subject out night shooting in an urban area and only use the light sources I find on the street. It’s a great way of learning a few things. How to get good focus in bad situations, how to hold a camera REALLY still and best of all how to see light. When you don’t have enough, you treasure what you find!

Developing a feel for light is the most rewarding of the challenges photography offers.

A recommendation.

Your lighting can be developed and helped by using off-camera flash (resist the urge to use more than one, at least to start with!) and spending the time going through David Hobby’s Strobist Lighting 101. It’s FREE and you won’t get better lighting training anywhere at that price, his stuff is pure gold in terms of quality and ease of understanding.

David Hobby’s Strobist 101

Make studying light an everyday thing, look at how it reflects off every different surface you see, metal, wood, dry skin, wet skin, silk, wool. Everything. Explore how it comes through the window, notice how good reflected light can look when combined with window light. See how films and tv programs use it. Read about it, discover what hard and soft light are, and where you find them and how you make them. Learn what the golden hour is, and why it’s good.

Again light is such a huge (and well covered) subject that I can only offer a few suggestions.

The old master painters knew a thing or two about portrait lighting. That’s probably a reasonable place to start…

Composition.

Composition is a huge subject encompassing depth of field, brightness zones, complementary colours, interacting shapes, rule of thirds, dynamic diagonals, leading lines, blocked and open spaces and a hundred other ways of breaking down an image into manageable lumps.

(If you just had a “what is he on about?” moment, it might be helpful to look up leading lines, the rule of thirds and complementary colours and how they are applied in conventional artwork.)

A good place to start is to make sure your background is simple. Apply the rule of thirds and see how your images come out.

Looking at really well made films is a great way of studying composition, in particular how the subjects interact with shapes, colour and lighting. Look out for teal and orange, there are bonus points for working out why it’s used so much…

Question: Do you put your subject in the centre of the viewfinder automatically?

Exposure and Focus
Once the light and composition, governed by your relationship with your subject are in place you can worry about your exposure and focus. (I had it backwards for the longest time. Mind you, the first 30 years were probably the worst…)
Question: What is the point in taking a dull photo even if it’s perfectly exposed and in focus?

Get the image great and then you have some REAL motivation for getting your focus and exposure correct! There’s nothing worse than having a glorious shot ruined by the focus being out or the camera set wrong.

There is a lot of information already out there on getting the exposure and focus right.

I have no magic system for it other than practice. Lots of practice. But always thoughtful, analytical practice.

It gets easier.

Finally

Of course it’s so much more complicated than that. All these five elements are completely interwoven, not only is focus a big part of composition, that itself is dependent on lighting, that is influenced by exposure that’s judged owing to your relationship with the subject. Each aspect influences every other one in a fabulous, dynamic web.

This is an awful lot to think about, and there are layers upon layers of each aspect to learn. By breaking it into aspects like this I hope it can be easier to pick up. Fortunately each layer of each aspect gets easier and more natural with practice.

Whilst I was learning to hold all of these delicate eggs balanced on the top of a bendy pole, on a windy day, with a bull charging at me, it wasn’t unusual for my head to feel like it was imploding. I find myself exhausted after a shoot that stretches my abilities.

I never said this was easy!

I hope breaking things down like this is a help to you. I know it is to me.

I hadn’t previously seen that I have a set order/pattern/design for shooting. I’ve since realised that I apply this process to everything I shoot, if sometimes in a somewhat abstract manner.

Of course, this is just how I see it, I’d like a discussion on these ideas, please chime in with your thoughts and comments.



Mar 07, 2012 at 07:38 AM
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silvawispa wrote:
Most important of all is the relationship you have with your subject. This is the driving force that moves us to take a photo in the first place. Being aware of that relationship can affect the rest of the decisions you make in the photographic process.

I agree with this. I also like the fact that you explain that the basic mechanics of photography are straightforward and can be fairly easily obtained.

Those starting out in photography have a huge advantage over previous generations because they receive instant feedback. They makes the entire loop of improvement move forward quickly.

It's good that you're going through the thought process to clarify your philosophy. My concern, not necessarily in this instance, is that too often talk is used as a substitute for action. Nothing replaces getting out and doing.

Your post comes at an interesting time. I was contemplating a post to challenge those who frequent this site to get out and shoot. Spring is coming for some of us and Fall is coming for others. Both seasons offer plenty of opportunity. For those who have been posting earlier work, even if only a year or so old, I suggest you set some personal photography goals and get out and shoot. Post if you feel like it, but it's not for us, it's for you.



Mar 07, 2012 at 08:42 AM
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Good piece, thought provoking for me anyway. Thanks for posting!

Rob



Mar 07, 2012 at 08:54 AM
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silvawispa ... good stuff.

I like your use of "look it up" ... it isn't meant to be rude, yet if one isn't willing to do their own homework (expecting to always be spoon fed), it does indicate a lack of conviction and may serve to separate some of the wheat & chaff via a mirror/reality check.

I would expand on your relate to the subject, by extending that to relate to your viewer (yourself, or others). I rarely shoot people because I don't relate to them very well (very important as you have noted). Technically, I could do portraits or weddings all day long, but ... there are others who relate with people much better than I ... best for me to stay out of that realm (athough my eye for wedding's is much better than a lot of junk that's out there).

Much like you've tried to encapsulate your shooting into your five steps ... I try to synthesize mine down to one (or two) ... i.e. "What's the point?" and "What is it that you are trying to convey to your viewer?" Admittedly, I don't always adhere to it as well as I should, but I find it is much more responsible for anything I deem worthy, than my "Oh, that would make a pretty pic" stuff ever has.

Again, +1 @ good stuff ... it is more about what's between your ears than what's in your hand.


dmacmillan wrote:
Post if you feel like it, but it's not for us, it's for you.


I think many of us try to post for a combination of both ourselves and for the benefit of aspiring to help others when / where / how we can.

On the "for me" part, digital PP has been an extremely challenging endeavor, like a gazillion times more difficult than it ought to have ever been ... and seeing/ doing all the reworks here has been invaluable as part of the "get out (or in) there and do it" aspect. I've been doing reworks as hard and fast as I've I've been able to over the past couple years hangin' in here with everyone. I'd like to think that I've progressed somewhat as a result ... specifically having set certain goals for myself @ PP in 2011 (i.e. layers, etc.).

While I'm no Ansel (and never will be), he embraced getting in there, i.e. darkroom (like Doug is suggesting @ getting out there) and doing it til he got it the way he wanted it, knowing that it was a part of the process that was necessary to master along with the rest of the processes involved as well as the studies, technical etc. It really is a holistic endeavor as it encompasses so much more than pushing a button ... from concept & previsualization, to sheer spontaneous reaction, all the way through the camera, file (i..e negative), print (i..e processing, finishing, framing) and display for either self or others.

I'm a fan of doing generates proficiency, proficiency generates confidence, confidence generates a willingness to tackle ever more to advance oneself. As posted before, I liken to Steve Garvey's "Perfect Practice Makes Perfect" ... not that one has to be perfect, but simply to be aware of what it is that you are building your proficiency in when you are getting "in there / out there" and doing it. Striving for improvment and growth requires perpetual analysis of status quo, meanwhile, also retaining the passion for the craft in your endeavors.

Whether you are a "newbie" learning the ropes or a "master" re-inventing and moving into a new "phase" ... ours is one of perpetuity ... which is quite the anti-thesis that OEM marketing hype would have the world to believe. For me, I'm somewhere between the 'newbie' and the 'master' ... with much to learn, and hopefully at least a little to share. While I learned a ton in my youth via books, magazines and trial & error ... FM'ers have been a wonderful resource that I count invaluable, so to the degree possible, I do try to reciprocate.

But, like Doug points out, ultimately my (your) work has to please me (you) ... and the only way I'm going to get my work where I want it ... is to keep doing it ("in there" and "out there"). Whether I'm machine gunning or crawling as fast as a snail going backwards, the pace isn't as important as the progression. For me, I'd rather be moving forward at a snails pace, than going around in a circle at Mach I with my hair on fire ... but that's me. Others will subscribe to a different philosophy / approach ... i.e. different strokes for different folks.

But I think the one thing that most of us would widely agree on is simply this ... "Don't Stop" ... as there is no end to what/where you can go with it, no matter if you are a "newbie", a "master" or an "avante garde".

"Bring on the pics" ... FM Rocks !!!



Mar 07, 2012 at 09:31 AM
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Good read Paul, the portion about light and your nocturnal ventures reminds me of some of your earlier posts - several come to mind.

Might you also suggest that over time, with lots of practice, comes a degree of pre-visualization and expand on that notion?

Regards,

Bob



Mar 07, 2012 at 05:49 PM
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Thanks for your useful thoughts guys.

Rusty, getting out of the spoonfed mentality is the first step I'd like to provoke.
Photography by numbers gets really stale, really quickly. Some people like it though.

Doing is definitely the best way of learning, but it has to be thoughtful doing.

Bob, if I expanded this essay to cover everything I want to say, I'd have a series of books on my hands and I'm not ready for that just yet!

That element of previsualisation is important and photography becomes so easy once you already know your end goal.
However, half the battle in photography for me is getting to the stage of seeing what it is I want to produce! Quite often I'll just experiment until I get some sort of a lead that takes me in a certain direction and then I'll build on that.

I'll get to work on the second half of the essay that covers post-production soon! (eventually)

Paul.



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silvawispa wrote:
This started in reply to Javier's thread, it was quite timely for me as I'd just offered a workshop in what I consider a safe and friendly enviroment.
_________________________________________________________________-

Introduction

This is a reworking of a reply on an internet forum I made to a photographer looking to improve his photography.

It’s now becoming an essay on my philosophy and methodology of my photography and possibly the basis of a short workshop that I’ll be holding soon.

It is not complete, finished or in any way guaranteed to ever be so, (or indeed to be useful, in any way, to anyone else, except me!)

It
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