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James Markus
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https://www.fredmiranda.com/hosting-data//500/76816FM_Fuji-Mum.jpg


Feb 17, 2012 at 08:47 AM
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I enjoy the pure white mum as opposed to the dyed ones my florist had.

I really like how the opposing corners represent the brightest and darkest points in the picture. For close-ups like this I find that selecting a crop is agonizing, how did you decide where to crop?



Feb 17, 2012 at 09:49 AM
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I like you photo and the close up shot but I would personally like to see the whole flower the black part of the background in this instance draws the eye more from the subject.

Norm



Feb 17, 2012 at 10:14 AM
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Great control of the whites James. Not an easy task! I like the depth of this shot as it seems to want to breach my monitor and reach out to me!

Greg



Feb 17, 2012 at 05:02 PM
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Superb shot, as always.

Happy shooting,
Yakim.



Feb 17, 2012 at 05:13 PM
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Thanks for the critique, and your analysis, McGrattan. Culling images is agonizing, but you have to be ruthless. This image is not cropped at all, except in how I framed it while shooting. Personally, I find shooting beautiful sunsets, women, and flowers not very challenging. They all are beautiful, and almost any photo or treatment is going to be beautiful too - unless you screw up. I need to have a vision, or goal when shooting topics such as these. In this shot I came close to my goals...a limited dof with creamy bokeh...light and shadow that have a broad dynamic range, and to capture the iridescence of the individual petals. The thing that made this image better than the other 25 keepers I shot was the way it fit within the rule of thirds. I just felt it was the strongest in all the categories of my goals. However, I had other flowers I shot that I felt were at least as visually compelling, but just didn't meet my vision as well. Today, three flowers I bought as buds opened...which spurred another 250 shots. I probably am done shooting flowers for a while....

McGrattan wrote:
I enjoy the pure white mum as opposed to the dyed ones my florist had.

I really like how the opposing corners represent the brightest and darkest points in the picture. For close-ups like this I find that selecting a crop is agonizing, how did you decide where to crop?




Feb 17, 2012 at 09:15 PM
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Well, Norm...it was the best shot from that session. Thanks for the comments.

Hightraxx wrote:
I like you photo and the close up shot but I would personally like to see the whole flower the black part of the background in this instance draws the eye more from the subject.

Norm




Feb 17, 2012 at 09:22 PM
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Thanks Greg - I'm glad you like it!

gregfountain wrote:
Great control of the whites James. Not an easy task! I like the depth of this shot as it seems to want to breach my monitor and reach out to me!

Greg




Feb 17, 2012 at 09:24 PM
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Thanks Yakim.

Yakim Peled wrote:
Superb shot, as always.

Happy shooting,
Yakim.




Feb 17, 2012 at 09:25 PM
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Beautiful shot James ! I love the selective dof and texture you have captured.

Birdie




Feb 17, 2012 at 10:42 PM
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Great shot James. Looks almost like it's jumping off the page.


Feb 17, 2012 at 11:15 PM
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Definitely a 3D image with subtle colors and attractive lighting. Well done!


Feb 20, 2012 at 02:28 AM
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This is so nice James. I agree with the others .... top shelp material.


Feb 20, 2012 at 12:55 PM
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A beautiful photograph, fits your goals perfectly! Love the light to the dark. Excellent in-camera crop. ~Jamie


Feb 20, 2012 at 09:48 PM
James Markus
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Thanks, birdie, Patrick, Bob, Mark, and Jamie.

BTW here are 40 more Mum shots that made the cut...
http://markus.photoshelter.com/gallery/Chrysanthemum/G0000qF.PWtYTsuc/

And another 16 Gerbera Daisy shots (a ridiculously beautiful flower) here
http://markus.photoshelter.com/gallery/Gerbera-Daisy/G0000nRbuF.V2R6M/

Plus I'm still culling 250 Iris shots (down to 37 now...whew)



Feb 21, 2012 at 11:50 AM
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Great flower with fantastic pov...Well done James!

Carolyn



Feb 21, 2012 at 02:47 PM
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I like this. The petals lead the eye deep into the flower.


Feb 22, 2012 at 06:47 AM





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