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Comments Welcome - Thanks ~Jamie

http://i222.photobucket.com/albums/dd183/46zr2/fm/018cp2bw640.jpg


edit: slight modifications to image per comments.

Edited on Feb 12, 2012 at 11:27 PM · View previous versions



Feb 10, 2012 at 11:36 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · #488 Casual


I like the idea but less the execution. I lack a bit of breathing space at the top while at the bottom the two little triangles steal unnecessary attention. Also, why so much noise?

Happy shooting,
Yakim.



Feb 12, 2012 at 05:33 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · #488 Casual


Yah I agree with Yakim... I love angle and the idea but the noise and a couple things distract - such as the wrinkles on one jean leg but not the other. rs

Cheers!



Feb 12, 2012 at 12:26 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · #488 Casual


Thanks for the comments. I appreciate it! I will play with it a bit. The wrinkles in the one pant leg, and the b&w conversion were to add to the casualness of the photo. ~Jamie


Feb 12, 2012 at 09:02 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · #488 Casual


Revised image uploaded with above comments. This conversion to b&w seems to add noise but it does add a "denim-casual" feel to the photo that the color didn't have. I don't have a noise reduction program as I wonder if that would help. Thanks again. ~Jamie


Feb 13, 2012 at 02:17 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · #488 Casual


For me, the crease in the denim draws my eyes to it and I don't think that should be my focal point.


Feb 14, 2012 at 06:25 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · #488 Casual


Thanks Pete for the comments. I will keep that in mind for future shots! ~Jamie


Feb 15, 2012 at 03:45 AM
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It's a simple shot that portrays the theme nicely so I like it.


Feb 15, 2012 at 05:52 AM





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